Brian W Porter
sarita brown:
aren't you so lucky to have a job right now. i am saying that sincerely. have a good work week,.
sarita brown:
sigh., yeah i had that childhood. and it is an omen. better days ahead. and 13 is my lucky number and mirrors break with fabulous consequences.. all part of the same party, eh Brian?
Brian W Porter:
I think that's what makes us look inside ourselves and become better writers. Now how can we convince people to pay us? That's the true question.
Shortfalls of Childhood (Excerpt From Naming Tonylobons
from Brian W Porter in Books, Fiction
Lloyd Webber's early childhood. This does not lead to a sane adult, or does it? A bit of insight. / Sorry about the font. Go to fullscreen and you can read it easier.
sarita brown
scribbled: this is really good. great character develpment love the bit where the four year old talks like a four year old and then changes the way he talks as he gets older. its painfully real. its the worl...
Tears to Wash the World Anew
from Kenosis23 in Creative Writing, Poetry
"These tears / May show us / As we really are ..."
Kenosis23:
I usually pick then indentations carefully and sometimes if you check out the way the indentations are made I am trying to add meaning ... for instance after then there are two isolated lines which say "I want to believe." I was trying to emphasize that.
Kenosis23:
and there are other things like that, but it is up to the reader to find them!
Tears to Wash the World Anew
from Kenosis23 in Creative Writing, Poetry
"These tears / May show us / As we really are ..."
Kenosis23:
Sorry about the spaces, that's my thing ... but I'm glad you got it!
Brian W Porter:
Yeah, it's part of your design, I know. For me it detracts, but I'll learn to ignore them when necessary. For others who are more visual? Who knows. It may add meaning.
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Tears to Wash the World Anew
from Kenosis23 in Creative Writing, Poetry
"These tears / May show us / As we really are ..."
Kenosis23:
Thank you Brian ... as always!
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Kiss (Muahhh)
from Midlunna
"falling slowly eyes that know me and i can't go back" remember that song??
Kiss (Muahhh)
from Midlunna
"falling slowly eyes that know me and i can't go back" remember that song??
aylime7:
only God knows for sure
sarita brown:
well i am a woman and i coudnt tell either but i detect a fine humour.l she published this in spanish too. wish i was good enough to offer her an english edit!!
Brian W Porter:
I think you would need days of conversation for that. The imagery? wrong word, the origin of some of the imagery is so different than we're used to you'd have to change your mindset totally. Something like that.
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The Ocean
from thomaswingfield in Creative Writing, Poetry
There is the ocean, take IT. There is the ocean, run into IT. There is the ocean, let IT take you. /
The Ocean
from thomaswingfield in Creative Writing, Poetry
There is the ocean, take IT. There is the ocean, run into IT. There is the ocean, let IT take you. /
thomaswingfield:
without a doubt, i think the intention was to make us justify what we put in, what I've been left with it just some 'things' on a page!
Kenosis23:
Yes, and it became some of what I think is my best.
helenwinslow:
Yes! Yes, yes, yes. Writing is not a spectator sport. You can't figure out what's going to happen BEFOREHAND (and you can't be afraid of that fact), but once you physically put the pen to paper it begins. Is this what you're talking about Brian? It's like diving. It's a physical process and for me it is absolutely linked to hand and pen.
helenwinslow:
So much so that it is very difficult to compose on the computer keyboard, it's artificial, I am not drawing the words. The exception is if I'm just doing a bunch of dialogue and it's coming really fast, then I can do that on the keyboard.
What They Said You Said #2
from sarita brown in Creative Writing, Poetry
poetic critique pleae on newere version better unnecessary? / my argument with fundamentalism in fire breathing colour.
sarita brown:
good. thank you.
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