Haz23309
intinti4785:
Write more, write more :) love your story!
lafete:
I'm glad :)
Truly, Madly, Deeply
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
(*Author's Note: In Process Last Updated: 09/18/09) / Frank is a psychatrist working on two "normal" attempted suicide cases. / Those two cases being Delilah and Romance; two 16 year old girls whom had been best friends for quite some time and, according to police reports, had tried to commit a tw...
Klaudia Karbowiak
scribbled: I'm on 17th page and I have to say that it's interesting and I'll come back to reading this soon ;]
intinti4785
scribbled: thats not the end right? i've finished all 93 pages, please update soon! I love this story =)
courtney0407
scribbled: oh wow so good. Please write more soon
intinti4785
scribbled: the end, no more update?!
Maryam_mowjood
scribbled: okay.. the ending was abrupt? or do you have more to the story?? anyway nice story! :)
Northern Lights
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
[Last Updated: 08/24/09](*Author's Note: In Process) Catalina Levi Danielson lives with her Mother in out in the countryside of California. She spends the weekends at her father's in San Francisco since her parents are divorced. / But on one weekend that seemed to be normal a tragedy happens. / C...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: I don't really know how long these comments can be or if there's a word limit or something, so I'm just gonna do it in increments to be safe. I hope that's okay.
LOL, so yeah, the first part:
...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Second part:
& dude, if I was Catalina, I would really, really, really be wondering what the **** they're hiding. & well, I guess she is to a certain extent, because... well, she's always askin...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Third part:
Like I was saying before, ya know, if I was Catalina, I'd be, like, "Okay, Kole, tell me what the **** is going on here or I'm gonna pop your balls like ******' grapes"... or someth...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Fourth part:
Ha ha ha, so yeah, seriously... okay, so I'm wondering what it is that's making Aiden avoid Catalina like he is. I mean, I get that he doesn't like the fact that Kole and Catalina ...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Fifth part (& sorry it's taken so many of these):
But um... well, I guess I'm basically to the point where the story leaves off. & wow, I was so... I don't know, actually really sad for Catalin...
She
from Hippo-Hippy in Creative Writing, Poetry
This character was based upon one of my previous classmates. The likeness is uncanny. This goes to all you people out there who can't stand dumb blondes.
Truly, Madly, Deeply
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
(*Author's Note: In Process Last Updated: 09/18/09) / Frank is a psychatrist working on two "normal" attempted suicide cases. / Those two cases being Delilah and Romance; two 16 year old girls whom had been best friends for quite some time and, according to police reports, had tried to commit a tw...
Klaudia Karbowiak
scribbled: I'm on 17th page and I have to say that it's interesting and I'll come back to reading this soon ;]
intinti4785
scribbled: thats not the end right? i've finished all 93 pages, please update soon! I love this story =)
courtney0407
scribbled: oh wow so good. Please write more soon
intinti4785
scribbled: the end, no more update?!
Maryam_mowjood
scribbled: okay.. the ending was abrupt? or do you have more to the story?? anyway nice story! :)
Truly, Madly, Deeply
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
(*Author's Note: In Process Last Updated: 09/18/09) / Frank is a psychatrist working on two "normal" attempted suicide cases. / Those two cases being Delilah and Romance; two 16 year old girls whom had been best friends for quite some time and, according to police reports, had tried to commit a tw...
Klaudia Karbowiak
scribbled: I'm on 17th page and I have to say that it's interesting and I'll come back to reading this soon ;]
intinti4785
scribbled: thats not the end right? i've finished all 93 pages, please update soon! I love this story =)
courtney0407
scribbled: oh wow so good. Please write more soon
intinti4785
scribbled: the end, no more update?!
Maryam_mowjood
scribbled: okay.. the ending was abrupt? or do you have more to the story?? anyway nice story! :)
Truly, Madly, Deeply
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
(*Author's Note: In Process Last Updated: 09/18/09) / Frank is a psychatrist working on two "normal" attempted suicide cases. / Those two cases being Delilah and Romance; two 16 year old girls whom had been best friends for quite some time and, according to police reports, had tried to commit a tw...
Klaudia Karbowiak
scribbled: I'm on 17th page and I have to say that it's interesting and I'll come back to reading this soon ;]
intinti4785
scribbled: thats not the end right? i've finished all 93 pages, please update soon! I love this story =)
courtney0407
scribbled: oh wow so good. Please write more soon
intinti4785
scribbled: the end, no more update?!
Maryam_mowjood
scribbled: okay.. the ending was abrupt? or do you have more to the story?? anyway nice story! :)
Northern Lights
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
[Last Updated: 08/24/09](*Author's Note: In Process) Catalina Levi Danielson lives with her Mother in out in the countryside of California. She spends the weekends at her father's in San Francisco since her parents are divorced. / But on one weekend that seemed to be normal a tragedy happens. / C...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: I don't really know how long these comments can be or if there's a word limit or something, so I'm just gonna do it in increments to be safe. I hope that's okay.
LOL, so yeah, the first part:
...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Second part:
& dude, if I was Catalina, I would really, really, really be wondering what the **** they're hiding. & well, I guess she is to a certain extent, because... well, she's always askin...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Third part:
Like I was saying before, ya know, if I was Catalina, I'd be, like, "Okay, Kole, tell me what the **** is going on here or I'm gonna pop your balls like ******' grapes"... or someth...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Fourth part:
Ha ha ha, so yeah, seriously... okay, so I'm wondering what it is that's making Aiden avoid Catalina like he is. I mean, I get that he doesn't like the fact that Kole and Catalina ...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Fifth part (& sorry it's taken so many of these):
But um... well, I guess I'm basically to the point where the story leaves off. & wow, I was so... I don't know, actually really sad for Catalin...
Northern Lights
from Haz23309 in Books, Fiction
[Last Updated: 08/24/09](*Author's Note: In Process) Catalina Levi Danielson lives with her Mother in out in the countryside of California. She spends the weekends at her father's in San Francisco since her parents are divorced. / But on one weekend that seemed to be normal a tragedy happens. / C...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: I don't really know how long these comments can be or if there's a word limit or something, so I'm just gonna do it in increments to be safe. I hope that's okay.
LOL, so yeah, the first part:
...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Second part:
& dude, if I was Catalina, I would really, really, really be wondering what the **** they're hiding. & well, I guess she is to a certain extent, because... well, she's always askin...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Third part:
Like I was saying before, ya know, if I was Catalina, I'd be, like, "Okay, Kole, tell me what the **** is going on here or I'm gonna pop your balls like ******' grapes"... or someth...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Fourth part:
Ha ha ha, so yeah, seriously... okay, so I'm wondering what it is that's making Aiden avoid Catalina like he is. I mean, I get that he doesn't like the fact that Kole and Catalina ...
alythezombie6661
scribbled: Fifth part (& sorry it's taken so many of these):
But um... well, I guess I'm basically to the point where the story leaves off. & wow, I was so... I don't know, actually really sad for Catalin...
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