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Fabulous! Intriguing point of view, carried out in a wondrous flow of language.

Beautiful poem that immediately captures all the attributes of these little white magic balls-dark and light. My wife's been stringing pearls for about a week now and I'm fascinated by the little buggars, though after reading your poem I may advise her to treat them with caution! Great work.

A conspiracy of pearls! I loved how you highlighted the basic flaw behind the beauty of the pearl and took it to its ultimate consequences.

thanks Phantomimic! Much appreciated!

amazing.. grasps you n then shocks you :)

wow!! cool......poem....

Thank you Rinki! Appreciated! :))

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