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New York Times bestselling author of 42 published novels in 5 genres, including the StarDoc SF series and the Darkyn dark fantasy series.
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Comment on Order of the Nine-The Stone Bearers
Posted on June 7, 2009
I downloaded this because it's difficult for me to read off the Scribd screen. In Adobe Reader the pages look clear, easy to read and the antique/parchment background is a nice touch. The graphics were a bit blurry and I've had the same problem with some of my e-books, so you might consider either sharpening the image by boosting the resolution or scaling down the image. I would redo the maps, as colored pencil can look a bit like crayon on the screen -- maybe photoshop them with a cutout or antique filter that will make them look more like an actual map. I've not seen excerpt boxes (left sidebar) in a fiction novel, but they looked fine and I thought they were an interesting approach. I'd suggest keeping them consistent -- the first is in standard font and the next two are in italics; I'd make them all one or the other. Overall, nicely done. :)