Made in DNA

Made in DNA scribbled: impressive.

48 p.

The Novel Notebook

from LynnViehl

Nonfiction notebook with fill-in templates and examples to help writers outline, plot and work on a story or novel

04/01/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: This needs a proper description. The title could be construed as misleading though I do not think this is intentional. Also, this is not a sports category item; it's business.

03/30/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: this hardly seems like a short story. you should probably remove it from improper categories.

03/28/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: now this piece has conflict, climax and resolution. nice piece.

4 p.

Voiceless

from soitgoes in Creative Writing, Short Stories

Short story. 1 full revision, a couple of partials. Looking for criticism

03/28/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: the padded version sounds forced once to get to the first brother wheeling on the second. the unpadded version sounds more natural. but in either version, i don't understand why the two brothers never see each other again if they have been visiting each other for years (as seems implied) at Christmas. unfortunately, there is no conflict in this piece. nothing happens. it's merely a scene. scenes don't make for good fiction. not that it's not well written, but something has to happen.

3 p.

Limping For Life

from soitgoes in Creative Writing, Short Stories

Two versions of the same story. This was written for a short story contest with the rules of using four specific words and 500-750 words long. / The "unpadded" version was written completely on my iPhone and weighed in at 340 words. The "padded" version clocks in at 650 or so. / Interested in...

03/28/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: you need a better description for this. something like 'Touring Tokyo in Chinese' or something similar. it's also in the wrong category.

5 p.

Tokyo

from aidem

四百年來的江戶城東京，像一場場炫目的華麗秀。無論你帶著一張採購單、還是貪饞的胃，它從不曾不精彩過。自從大蜘蛛爬上六本木 Hills ，東京仍在變：「同潤會」

03/28/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: If you encounter illegible fonts in the iPaper version of my work, please click the DOWNLOAD PDF version, which will automatically load a legible version of the work into Adobe Reader. The problem is not my fonts or my work; they are both fine.

4 p.

Samurai Androids RPG: Origins

from Made in DNA

The origins of the Samurai Androids. Future uploads will include rules for board games, RPGs, and mini-games, all distributed under a CC license.

03/28/2008

Made in DNA published:

4 p.

Samurai Androids RPG: Origins

from Made in DNA

The origins of the Samurai Androids. Future uploads will include rules for board games, RPGs, and mini-games, all distributed under a CC license.

03/28/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: excellent work!

47 p.

Narrative in Computer Games

from clone.of.james

MA Thesis

03/27/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: great fun! nostaglic at the very least.

12 p.

Sid Sackson Boardgame Design Document 3

from johnhattan

Dated December 1976, this is a printed draft of the boxed games rules. The four extra games in this set are "Nine Holes", "Steeplechase", "The Inside Lane", and "Michigan Rummy". Presumably these were omitted from the Multi Game Rug because they required one more playing board and a set of playin...

03/27/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: okay, now THIS is FAR MORE interesting. perhaps you should consider combining all three of these docs together into one with this one being the first. just a thought. thanks. very cool. thumbs up.

8 p.

Sid Sackson Boardgame Design Document 2

from johnhattan

Dated September 1976, this was a printed draft of the manual. It contains a couple of small handwritten edits by Sackson, but it is essentially complete.

03/27/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: gah, while interesting, a little difficult to read. a typed version included would increase its 'value' here in my opinion. still, if this really is Sid's work, interesting.

45 p.

Sid Sackson Boardgame Design Document 1

from johnhattan

Dated October 1975. It includes 31 games. In this draft is a two-page list of the games along with references and page-numbers from where he got the rules.

03/27/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: interesting and well put together magazine. bravo.

17 p.

GM Tech Magazine: Issue Three

from gamez93

GM Tech Magazine is a Game Maker magazine, which gives you Interviews, Reviews, Previews, Articles, Tutorials, Extras, Free Resources, News and Exclusives.

03/27/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: interesting. similar to The Richest Man in Babylon. it was obviously a lesson to people of its day.

4 p.

Ihara Saikaku - The Eternal Storehouse

from burningmonk

Ihara Saikaku - The Eternal Storehouse

03/27/2008

Made in DNA scribbled: a little long in tooth, but that was the style of the day. this is a classic horror story of post-fuedal japan. worth the read.

20 p.