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 Jhared had prepared for this moment for twelve years, but he had never expectedthe hawk to enthrall him.She soared above the valley oor, talons clutching the success of her hunt as anoonday sun painted her body in gold, and he followed—although he feared it was wrong. His eyes tracked her and his mind dried as she wheeled in an eortless archtoward the clis. Below, the city shrank to a grey smudge against the foothills of theParnas Mountains. e river, silver and quick with the spring thaw, divided the darkforest like a belt. With slow, powerful wingbeats, the hawk hovered above a rocky crag, thensettled on the narrow ledge and carefully folded her wings. Her chicks chirped franticgreetings from the nest, stepping over one another to claim her. A breeze swirled o themountain crevice and ued their cream-colored down as the hawk bent her head tomeet each open mouth. When the sun leaned toward the death of the day, she le the nest once more. Her wings extended. Her long, strong primary feathers irted with the mountain thermalsbefore she glided lower into the valley. She was magnicent; Jhared hadn’t expectedthat, either. From the crown of the hill, he watched the perfection of her ight and feltan answering excitement in his own body, a leaning into the buoyancy of the wind.
 Riana commands that a bird of prey be slain in the prime of spring.
e temple’s order dragged his thoughts back to the ground. Despite the warmthof the spring day, a shiver took him, passing from his shoulders through his arms tohis hands, which already held the bow. He stared at the weapon, as though this were adecision he could make, then turned quickly to the bird again. He knew the invisiblecurve she traced against the clouds and shied his arm until he reached the necessary
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angle between the horizon and the sky. His breathing slowed as he anchored himself.He sought the instant of absolute stillness in the pause between heartbeats, felt it whenthe moment came. e bowstring thrummed soly as he released. With deadly speed, the sha hurtled upward. She screeched as it penetrated herso feathers, tore her esh, and shattered her breast. Her wings pumped hard to propelher above the pain. en she crumpled and began the long tumble toward the ground.Lower on the hill, Branlen threw back his head and let out a whoop of victory. Jhared stood silently, unable to look away from the plummeting bird, a dull achestarting behind his eyes. Her body somersaulted toward the river and the ancientaqueduct, then disappeared into the thicket along the bank.“You did it!” With a sunny laugh, Branlen scrambled down the rocky incline,heading toward the meadow and the riverbank. e boy glanced over his shoulder to Jhared, who stood motionless: waiting to feel joy, excitement, relief, anything. So many years of waiting.“Come on!” the boy cried. “You made the kill. Come help me nd it!”“Go ahead, Bran. I’m right behind you.” e bird was down. He would be allowedto enter the Becoming. Riana gave him this gi.
e raptor must die in the prime of spring.
Shaking his head to clear away his questions before they could fully form, Jharedmarked in his mind the point at which the hawk had entered the forest, then swung hisbow across his back and turned to follow Branlen toward the sounds of the river.e world swayed and his stomach churned, as though he stood at the edge of agreat height. As he stepped toward the meadow, the ground dropped out from underhim. He lurched forward. e ache behind his eyes exploded into shards of light.Branlen, the meadow, and the forest became small pieces in a patchwork of countrysideas he fell away from them. He saw the blur of the arrow a helpless moment beforeit pierced his chest, felt it ripping through muscle and lodging against bone. Agonyloosed an animal scream in his head. Grey clis, blue sky, and green trees streamed intoone long tail of color as he spiraled over and over toward oblivion.“Jhared?”A distant voice reached him through layers of fog. Jhared tried to answer, butcouldn’t utter a sound. He couldn’t catch his breath for the pain in his chest. Heartbeatsechoed faintly in his ears.“Jhared!”Someone tugged at his body, and he clung to the warmth of that rare contact.Slowly, he tracked his way along a fog-shrouded path, until he could open his eyes.Branlen knelt beside him, gripping his shoulder. e boy’s startled blue gaze dartedover his face, as if trying to determine whether this could possibly be a big brother’s joke. Jhared looked down at his hands, which were clenched over his chest. Unlocking his ngers, he found his palms torn and bloody: not from an arrow, but from the bite of his nails.Branlen’s eyes went wide. “What in Cael’s darkness…?”“I was...we were...falling.” Jhared struggled for breath. No sha pierced his heart, yet emptiness grew within him as though something vital had ruptured. Nothing hadso overwhelmed him since his mother’s death. His Teachers’ voices snapped in hismind:
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“I was halfway to the river when I heard you yell.” Branlen’s hand tightened on Jhared’s shoulder. “I’ve never heard such a sound. I thought you were...I thought you were dying.” Jhared took another breath and tried to summon an image of tranquility from theexercises General Nadel had taught him. He sought an explanation he could give theboy. He wished he had one for himself.“It must be the fast, Bran. You know I don’t do well when I haven’t eaten. Bytomorrow I’ll probably want to gobble up all the remains of Neta’s winter stores.”Slowly, he sat up and tried a smile. “Maybe that’s why the Becoming is held in thespring, eh?”Branlen returned the smile hesitantly.To prove his reassurance, Jhared forced himself to his feet and straightened,rubbing the center of his chest with one hand. e meadow tilted for a moment, thenrighted itself. Branlen kept a grip on his arm.“I’m ne, Brother. I need to nd the bird. And you’ve a job to do as well.” Jhared was glad to see the boy’s smile, but speaking of the hawk stirred the pain in his chest.Brans face lightened. “I’ll stay and help. I’ve plenty of time to reach the temple, andMother won’t expect me back until aer sundown. I’ve been practicing my tracking.Last week I tracked a Trevaye wolf to the river.”
e raptor must die…
Of course she must. e temple ordered it.“Are you really all right? You look like Rona’s ghost. Maybe you should sit backdown for a while.”“Hmm?” Jhared blinked. “No, I… I mean, yes, yes. You can stay. But be careful of the Trevaye, Bran. e Chosen are…unpredictable.”Branlen only grinned more broadly. “I know.”Together they climbed down the hill to the river. Jhared gazed across the fertile valley nestled below the foothills. A riot of colors, early-blooming wildowers, blurredand trembled in his vision. He paused to steady himself, feigning interest in a clump of blood-colored widow’s tears, while he drew slow breaths. e owers grew as Rianasmemorial to the men and women who died in this valley during the Exile War. Hestroked a velvety stamen between his nger and thumb until it wept a drop of silvernectar. It struck him suddenly that he was right to remember those deaths today.
“But, Madam Trianor, what happened to the traitorous Avelune aer the war? Aer Tumal the Just droe them out of the country?” “ey died of shame, child. Just the same as your mother would if she knew the kind of  questions you ask. Back to the lesson: tell me the names of the families killed in the Battleof Parnas Valley.” 
He straightened and made his way aer Branlen. ey le the open meadow, passing under the crumbling arches of the abandoned aqueduct, and paused at theriverbank. Concealed somewhere within that long stretch of brush and trees was thebody he must give Riana.“I’ll search the trees, if you can handle the bank,” he oered Branlen.e boy sent him the sort of aggrieved look only a little brother could manage.“I’ve spent more hours among these banks than you have. And besides, a Forest Guard patrolman would take whatever job he’s ordered, right?”“Of course, Bran, but this—” e boy’s look darkened, and Jhared threw up his
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