PhilC68

PhilC68 scribbled:
At the suggestion of a literary agent, I am taking a long, hard look at how my novel evolves. I am thinking about re-including previously deleted chapters on how the mysterious objects were investigated in 1967-1969 to give more contextual meaning to why these objects are important and why Mike Liu and Johnny Thapala became friends. What do you think?
about 3 hours ago
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Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - E...

Mildred has learn the identity of her mysterious attacker and has gone to Des Moines, Iowa, to learn more about her. / The time is 1993 and Mike Liu...

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11 / 07 / 2009
PhilC68 scribbled:
I wonder if I should move my excerpts into the book category to access more readers?
10 / 14 / 2009
PhilC68 scribbled:
I have now posted a series of chapters that I deleted from my first draft of Falling Star after being told by agents I spoke with that trying to tell about the discovery of the objects in the 1967-1970 time-frame was confusing to the main story set in the 1990s. I would be interested in hearing from the readers of these excerpts on what they think about these deleted sections.
10 / 11 / 2009
PhilC68 published:

Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - D...

In this deleted section, Mike's mentor, Bob McHugh, comes face to face with the mysterious object that triggered the geo-magnetic signal. Also Mik...

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10 / 11 / 2009
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Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - D...

In this deleted section, Mike learns about the underbelly of the military and starts works on the Squid, a free swimming submersible capable of 20,...

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10 / 10 / 2009
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Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - D...

In this second deleted section, a young Mike Liu continues in the investigation into the anomalous magnetometer reading in 1967. / The time is 1993 ...

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10 / 09 / 2009
PhilC68 published:

Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - D...

This is a deleted section from an earlier draft wherein Mike has been asked to assist in the investigation into the mystery surrounding the anomalo...

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Books, Fiction

10 / 08 / 2009
PhilC68 scribbled:
If you have enjoyed reading these excerpts, please join my Face Book Page at http://www.facebook.com/pages/Philip-... I will chronicle my efforts to get published there. Thank you. Phil
09 / 28 / 2009
PhilC68 published:

Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star -Ex...

In yet another coincidence of life copying fiction, the September 23, 2009 report of a stolen helicopter being used for an assault on a Swedish cas...

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Books, Fiction

09 / 23 / 2009
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Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - E...

In this excerpt, Mike and crew make a gruesome discovery. / The time is 1993 and Mike Liu is deep into a project when an insistent caller changes hi...

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Books, Fiction

08 / 30 / 2009
PhilC68 scribbled:
For those of you who might be interested, I started a Face Book group to chronicle my efforts to get this novel published. Please join and participate on how I can get this novel into print. The group is found at http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid... Thank you
08 / 20 / 2009
PhilC68 published:

Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - R...

In this excerpt, Mike and FBI agent, Herb Adams, discover some interesting facts about a dead terrorist. / The time is 1993 and Mike Liu is deep int...

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Books, Fiction

07 / 29 / 2009
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Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - R...

How did Mildred become what she is? / The time is 1993 and Mike Liu is deep into a project when an insistent caller changes his life forever. Som...

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Books, Fiction

07 / 03 / 2009
PhilC68 published:

Sci-Fi about aliens: Falling Star - E...

All Mike thought he had to do was to unravel a thorny issue on a project financing, until a phone call interrupts. / The time is 1993 and Mike Liu i...

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Books, Fiction

06 / 26 / 2009

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Name
PhilC68
Bio
This is a novel and, as such, is fiction. But it draws upon a life-long interest in space and our interaction with the unseen forces of the unive... (More)
Gender
Male
Website
http://strangenessinuniverse.blogspot.com
Occupation
I have been an ocean research engineer, environmental and power plant engineer, energy and enviro... (More)
Interests
I also do cartoons, some of which are featured in a cartoon caption contest in the NY Times blog:... (More)
Lately I've been writing
I have written both short stories, novels and cartoons at: http://strangenessinun... (More)
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