RyanMT
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Here are some gripes I have with your paper:
1) Completely subjective
2) Horrible, distracting grammar errors
3) Childish writing style
4) Idiomatic language
5) Irrelevant conclusions
6) No academic value even REMOTELY
Scrib this: I AM A BAD WRITER. I AM A BAD WRITER. I AM A BAD WRITER. I AM A BAD WRITER. I AM A BAD WRITER.