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Saxophone911 Scribbled:
Finally, a new poem. more to come.
1 day ago
Saxophone911 published:

Day One

Isn't it good, my block ends on the new year, a fresh start. this came to me after showing up unexpected on my girlfriends doorstep with flowers on...

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Linglang scribbled:

aaah :)

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Saxophone911 Scribbled:
WOOT halfway through the first poem in an age. gimme a day or two.....
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Saxophone911 Scribbled:
wow. good to see something up. its awesome. ..........rebecca has tainted you with tokio hotel though
12 / 26 / 2009
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peanut_love Replied:

I would say blessed rather than tainted lol :3

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Saxophone911 Scribbled:
all this time i have been chasing smoke, i never realised what was right in front of me. my tone of poetry will change when i write more. in short. i had a date yesterday
12 / 26 / 2009
Saxophone911 Scribbled:
trials and distractions, things are not well, cannot put anything up because i have not written a thing.......no matter how hard i try
12 / 19 / 2009
Saxophone911 Scribbled:
trials and distractions, things are not well, cannot put anything up because i have not written a thing.......no matter how hard i try
12 / 19 / 2009
Saxophone911 Scribbled:
thanks for the comments, and lol it was an early morning posting in new zealand = >

Insomnia

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12 / 15 / 2009
Saxophone911 published:

Insomnia

I have struggled to sleep lately, but at least now i've finally written something new. worn out atm but maybe more poetry will come SOON =<

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12 / 13 / 2009
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Phantomimic scribbled:

Haunting, the realm of dreams can be unsettling, like a bizarre dimension where the rules are different.

12 / 13 / 2009

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sarita brown scribbled:

is reading Insomnia.

12 / 14 / 2009

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enkidukid scribbled:

This has a lovely sense of unease - just enough to tempt and just enough to make one shiver.

12 / 14 / 2009

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Saxophone911 scribbled:

thanks for the comments, and lol it was an early morning posting in new zealand = >

12 / 15 / 2009

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SoraRyu scribbled:

palatable and tangible. a win

12 / 18 / 2009

Saxophone911 Scribbled:
NOTHING COMES, even though i am happy, nothing............i am have been converted to metal lol its odd hearing a metal version of old songs i love, eg. kiss from a rose, brothers in arms, hello (lionel Ritchie) its augmented my music lol
12 / 07 / 2009
Saxophone911 Scribbled:
I will hear no bells this christmas, but for the bells that toll for the lonely heart i bear. thats the reason i can write, that line keeps coming and i cant put it into a poem = <
11 / 28 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied:

Sounds like it may be complete all on it's own Sax.

11 / 28 / 2009

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sarita brown Replied:

i agree! its a nano story!!

11 / 28 / 2009

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Saxophone911 Replied:

thanks, its half done, for once i hate school holidays. 2 MONTHS and only 2 days to see her til "POOF" nothing

11 / 29 / 2009

Saxophone911 Scribbled:
words arent coming. i am sorry. i hope shakespeare said it best when he said "absence makes the heart grow stronger"
11 / 28 / 2009
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Saxophone911 Replied:

Fonder, i meant Fonder

11 / 29 / 2009

Saxophone911 published:

Is This Really Enough?

This came to me oddly, I just dont find myself with the words i used to. two more days i'll actually see her...for two whole months = <

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11 / 26 / 2009
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Adventure Gal MiMi scribbled:

So personal , full of meaning....love it!

12 / 02 / 2009

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aylime7 scribbled:

the first line from the third stanza is so inspired...

12 / 02 / 2009

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SoraRyu scribbled:

totally understand how you feel. unrequited love sucks :(

12 / 18 / 2009

Saxophone911 Scribbled:
is it one of these moments "I have to remind myself that some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright and when they fly away, the part of you that knows it was a sin to lock them up does rejoice, but still, the place you live in is that much more drab and empty that they're gone." hehehe im good with quotes
11 / 22 / 2009
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Midlunna Replied:

i once scribbled something like that "a free spirited inside a cage sounds unreasonable"

11 / 22 / 2009

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Saxophone911 Replied:

its not unreasonable, i still havent had my moment to let her go, i hope i never do. thats a quote from the shawshank redemption. believe it or not some good insight comes from movies. old ones from good books

11 / 22 / 2009

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Phantomimic Replied:

Once my parents got me a bird, it just sat on its cage all day long and didn't sing. One day while I was cleaning its cage it escaped and started singing the most beautiful songs. This bird had probably been caught in the wild and placed in a cage. It was so glad to be free.

11 / 22 / 2009

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Saxophone911 Replied:

being free is the greatest thing in life and hard to value til its gone, thats why i hate secrets and lies so much. but alas they are also a neccesary evil

11 / 23 / 2009

Saxophone911 Scribbled:
love is a pleasure but also a pain, a crystal window with a broken frame. i want peoples opinions on love, feel free to say anything PLZ!?!?!?
11 / 22 / 2009
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Midlunna Replied:

hahaha yeah ! well for me its complicated loving something that nerver will return but then again life haves ups downs who knows....

11 / 22 / 2009

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Saxophone911 Replied:

is it one of these moments "I have to remind myself that some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright and when they fly away, the part of you that knows it was a sin to lock them up does rejoice, but still, the place you live in is that much more drab and empty that they're gone." hehehe im good with quotes

11 / 22 / 2009

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Midlunna Replied:

yeah your on fire dude haha with the ryhmes and quotes

11 / 22 / 2009

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Saxophone911 Replied:

it sucks rhymes hit me at the worst moments, i tend to studder and ryhme if i spend to much time with "her". i dont come up with my poems. they come into my head half formed and the rest flows

11 / 22 / 2009