Isn't it good, my block ends on the new year, a fresh start. this came to me after showing up unexpected on my girlfriends doorstep with flowers on...
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I have struggled to sleep lately, but at least now i've finally written something new. worn out atm but maybe more poetry will come SOON =<
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Phantomimic scribbled:
Haunting, the realm of dreams can be unsettling, like a bizarre dimension where the rules are different.
enkidukid scribbled:
This has a lovely sense of unease - just enough to tempt and just enough to make one shiver.
Saxophone911 scribbled:
thanks for the comments, and lol it was an early morning posting in new zealand = >
Saxophone911 Replied:
thanks, its half done, for once i hate school holidays. 2 MONTHS and only 2 days to see her til "POOF" nothing
This came to me oddly, I just dont find myself with the words i used to. two more days i'll actually see her...for two whole months = <
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Midlunna Replied:
i once scribbled something like that "a free spirited inside a cage sounds unreasonable"
Saxophone911 Replied:
its not unreasonable, i still havent had my moment to let her go, i hope i never do. thats a quote from the shawshank redemption. believe it or not some good insight comes from movies. old ones from good books
Phantomimic Replied:
Once my parents got me a bird, it just sat on its cage all day long and didn't sing. One day while I was cleaning its cage it escaped and started singing the most beautiful songs. This bird had probably been caught in the wild and placed in a cage. It was so glad to be free.
Saxophone911 Replied:
being free is the greatest thing in life and hard to value til its gone, thats why i hate secrets and lies so much. but alas they are also a neccesary evil
Midlunna Replied:
hahaha yeah ! well for me its complicated loving something that nerver will return but then again life haves ups downs who knows....
Saxophone911 Replied:
is it one of these moments "I have to remind myself that some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright and when they fly away, the part of you that knows it was a sin to lock them up does rejoice, but still, the place you live in is that much more drab and empty that they're gone." hehehe im good with quotes
Saxophone911 Replied:
it sucks rhymes hit me at the worst moments, i tend to studder and ryhme if i spend to much time with "her". i dont come up with my poems. they come into my head half formed and the rest flows