ShimmerStar scribbled: Please comment, good? bad? 04/19/2009

courtney0407 scribbled: oh I like it. I can't wait to read more 04/20/2009

tuohy48 scribbled: really really good writting can not wait for the next chapter please hurry!! 04/21/2009

cullengirl1328 scribbled: very good... but is there a next chapter 2 this? 04/25/2009

CensusFail scribbled: wow she's totally OP (time control? Super strength AND speed?) but then again so is everyone. I really liked this. Awesome work. 04/26/2009

Marleenu scribbled: itś really good !! :D writeee more (A):P 04/26/2009

luzvanni scribbled: omg write more! 04/26/2009

court72396 scribbled: thats gud 04/27/2009

officialadamcorley scribbled: Hey! This is really good. Email me at adam.bbyxxx@yahoo.com I think we should talk. xoxo 05/02/2009

twinster921 scribbled: write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... 05/04/2009

butterflyjli1 scribbled: please write more! 05/06/2009

haippa scribbled: plz write more plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 05/07/2009

!**XXAngelVampirePrincess Ella XX! scribbled: OMG! I'm hooked! This is awesome! I'm reading like a bunch of Twilight fan-fiction books, you all should check them out. The Night Fall Series The Sunset Series The Sunrise Book (I mean t... 05/09/2009

!**XXAngelVampirePrincess Ella XX! scribbled: Oh, and The Fate book (even though it only has one chapter down) it sounds pretty interesting. 05/09/2009

xp47 scribbled: This is actually a good story! I've read other documents also 'sequals' or documents based on twilight that were very bad, but this, yeah this has something. Nice job! Keep writing! 06/02/2009

xp47 scribbled: Did you write another chapter jet? please post! it's so good! 06/02/2009

MosJorMia scribbled: It is really good... care to explain a little more about how he is Jasper sister and why does she know about war tactics??? 06/02/2009

carina_chavez scribbled: Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its so interesting!! Please explain more about her Jasper and other characters. WRITE MORE!!! 06/05/2009

Vamp-Gurl scribbled: I'm so confused! who is? What is she? This is great you are a wonderful writer, but when i read something I need to fully understand it or it iratates me. Can you please send me an email (sombagrac... 06/16/2009

TwilightSaga39 scribbled: This is great! Keep on writing. I'm aching 2 read more! 06/21/2009

crna1328 scribbled: HELLO!!! ANYMORE!!! 06/21/2009

midnightrises scribbled: OMFG this is awsome 06/22/2009

midnightrises scribbled: write more!!!!!!!!!!!! 06/22/2009

crna1328 scribbled: OMFG! Sorry i'm so annoying but write (Type)Faster .Do more! Please! 06/26/2009

Kimecia94 scribbled: WRITE!!! 06/28/2009

MEGAtwilightFAN scribbled: wow 06/29/2009

SinWolf Productions scribbled: wait, if she is jasper's biological sister, wouldn't that make jasper have the wolf trait, or what? 07/13/2009

crna13 scribbled: yo.more. 07/26/2009

ShimmerStar scribbled: Plz comment..good? bad? 04/09/2009

tuohy48 scribbled: this is very good, i like it and i cannot wait for you to add the rest!!!! 04/13/2009

Minnie0809 scribbled: wait if jasper created her shoulnt she be kimberley hale..??? 04/13/2009

sigie9 scribbled: kepp writing i want to see how it turns out. it's real good so far. 04/13/2009

courtney0407 scribbled: I like it so far. 04/15/2009

ShimmerStar scribbled: Yeah she is Kimberley Hale...i made a mistake lol 04/19/2009

ShimmerStar scribbled: Ok chapters 1-3 are up, here is the link http://www.scribd.com/doc/14428059/Ri... 04/19/2009

doha rocks scribbled: HEY EVERYONE i have all the books including midnight sun, if u want them, send me an email requesting which books u want and i will send them to u in less then a day. DID U GET THAT, I MEAN LESS ... 04/27/2009