well, it was good and touching!! really , though i am a big hp maniac so everything related to it touches me. it was really well arranged and you have a good understanding of stuffs of hp franchise! and yes, i want to add that since Lord Voldemort was born not as a result of natural love but because of artificial (as Merope Gaunt i.e. Voldemort's mother used love potion to make Tom Riddle i.e. Voldemort's father to fall in love with her), thats why Voldemort never had even a drop of love in him which was the cause of his end as inspite of Lily's protection, he chose not to have any remorse, because there was 'lack' of love in him!!