Varun Pawar

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Thanks a lot for your comments....really appreciate it..

07 / 14 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Hey!! No not exactly busy, studies and college work does take up loads of time, but then writing still remains the top priority. Have been working on a novella and that is hard to write, trying hard to evolve to larger pieces of literature. Sorry I could not comment on your works, will do so in the near future...

2 p.

My Lonely Avenue

From: Varun Pawar

04 / 17 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

And yes the final verse is truly truly commendable....Awesome stuff..

1 p.

Ode To Woodman Maam

From: huss_hellraiser

04 / 05 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Genuinely dude one of the best, heartfelt poems I have ever read. Pain, nostalgia, love, depth of emotion this poem has it all. Genuinely awesome stuff.... why dont you write some more poetry is what I ask??

1 p.

Ode To Woodman Maam

From: huss_hellraiser

04 / 05 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Lol. Really hope none of my professors ever reads this one. I'd be in serious trouble then. But then Engineering was never my subject. Like a fish out of water.

1 p.

A cry against academics

From: Varun Pawar

03 / 14 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Sorry I couldnt keep in touch for quite some time. Exam season at my place. Liked this story. Loved the character of the Boss. Dont know why but seemed very identifiable. Keep up the good work.

5 p.

Small Touches

From: mohansuramya7228

02 / 04 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

1997? I must have been 7 years old then. A long time ago. Loved the last four lines. Dont we all crave for that someone who listens to us, and just doesn't hear? Nice poem. Thanks for your comments on black and white, its one of my favourite stories, wrote it at a very hard time in my life. You once said you do not explain your works, but the last two lines in the first verse, "You ask me why I so choose? I've to find what I cannot lose". Could you please give me the poet's( your) interpretation of the line. It baffles me.

1 p.

I, Me, Myself

From: mohansuramya7228

01 / 14 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Thanks a lot for the comments you posted. One thing I did not get here, was Uncle trying to defy human logic and society's convention by trying to jump of the building again? I really did not get why the balcony guy said terming uncle insane would be a mad thing to do. Please explain it to me. There is something more to this story that I cant see through.

2 p.

The Fall

From: mohansuramya7228

01 / 10 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Chilling. Nicely written story. Good plot and ending. But i preferred your stories on human relationships. Probably because I am not a ghost-story person, but still nice work.

10 p.

Company for the Journey

From: mohansuramya7228

01 / 04 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

You have a way with writing dialogue. Good dialogue and very interesting story. The ending was almost jarring. Bot the characters are deep and highly unpredictable. Nice work! Try checking out my other stuff, looking forward to your reviews.

8 p.

Mind Games

From: mohansuramya7228

01 / 04 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

One of the best stories I have read on scribd. The characters, rohan, samira, anita and their mother, telling their part of the story in first person was amazing. The feeling you get when you read rohan's part is magical. A very nicely written tragedy.Moving. I write a lot of tragedies and fail often in connecting with the reader, the pain is just not conveyed. This one spoke of the pain, simply, directly and successfully.

4 p.

THE PAST

From: mohansuramya7228

01 / 03 / 2009

Varun Pawar Scribbled:

Very nicely written. Great concept! The idea of the soul he killed seven years ago, was very nice. The pleasure we feel when someone else understands us is immense... If you are going through my stuff try the story called "ray magini" it, i feel is my best till date. Will go through the rest of your stuff shortly and will tell you about it.

5 p.

One More Evening

From: mohansuramya7228

01 / 03 / 2009