Crystal: I'm not sure about Father Moses, either. I kind of put it in there as a respectful shorthand a father might use with a young child. Kind of like we talk about "Baby Jesus."

Yes, I should change Yahweh to "The Name" or "Ha-Shem": Just what a proper Jewish father would say. I like your fourth comment. It would still break the father's heart to see his girl's heart broken, so it doesn't change the crux of the story there. I can change that. 2 Chron 36:22 specifically says God moved Cyrus' heart. Is. 44:28 alludes to it as well. Thanks for the Bible references. I'd forgotten that I'd put it in there, then never went back to check them. I appreciated your knowledge very, very much. I'll have to look at that site. We have had a very tough couple of weeks, but things are settling down, and I'll get my NaNo to you soon. Blessings! Voni

Jean: The Mitford series is one of my favorite. Thanks for bringing in the homey and warm feeling of those books.

Hi Crystal. Shortstuff from LCW here. :) I will write a devotional, but not until after nanowrimo. Christian Writers on Scribd doesn't look like LCW. Am I wrong somewhere? I thought that was the place to upload for public viewing. Where is the place for LCW-only publication? I'm being confused.