hochallee77 scribbled: great stuff, you won, i didnt (in the contest), now i can see why 10/07/2009

Su Polo scribbled: HEy! I like this. What a fun read. A Zork-like romp though many worlds. 10/09/2009

Ideal Champ scribbled: I enjoyed reading this very much. You have the ability to gather many types of philosophies into one witty and somewhat emotional short story. Thanks! 10/22/2009

duncanleed scribbled: Provocative story. You seem to lean toward Vonnegut or perhaps Douglas. Thanks - 10/22/2009

adobbs scribbled: Thank you everyone for the encouragement. I'm cracking away on longer works now. 10/23/2009

anthony_alaniz scribbled: Thanks for sharing :D great story. I really enjoyed it. 10/27/2009

adobbs scribbled: The Other Side is currently the #1 rising short story! That gives me encouragement as I wrestle with my second draft of Traveler and get ready for NaNoWriMo. 10/27/2009

Brian W Porter scribbled: Poor Chicken. Just crossing the road and whoosh. I'd rather be Willy. A good read, with humor. Thanks. I needed that. 10/27/2009

duponthumanite scribbled: Reminded me very much of all the philosophical chicken jokes that I have heard over the past few years. The whole feel was of a stand-up comedy. Because it deals with death, it made this reader la... 10/27/2009

Lfarden scribbled: A dash of wisdom and philosophical whimsy! Keep honing your pen. 10/29/2009

adobbs scribbled: Thanks for the feedback. For some reason, when I was writing it the characters all had sarcastic, pseudo-British accents. 10/31/2009

Adventure Girl MiMi scribbled: Creative mind! 10/31/2009

enkidukid scribbled: I was wriggling too - with pleasure - and some not unpleasant discomfort! 11/01/2009

Mushahid scribbled: I didnt get it.......what is the moral.. 11/12/2009