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alluringbette Scribbled:
... thanks my friend ... ha! ha! ... nah, your just a very deep, intense, intelligent, keen, insightful, ingenious and cultivated person who understands ones sporadically complex formulated expressions ... this poesy actually started out as a joke about my sister, however, ended up regarding a friend’s ex …
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Kenosis23 scribbled:

Great stuff (I had less trouble reading this then usual ... maybe I'm getting smarter!)

12 / 22 / 2008

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alluringbette scribbled:

... thanks my friend ... ha! ha! ... nah, your just a very deep, intense, intelligent, keen, insightful, ingenious and cultivated person who understands ones sporadically complex formulated express...

02 / 10 / 2009

alluringbette Scribbled:
... thanks as always ...

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12 / 22 / 2008
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10 / 19 / 2008
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Kenosis23 scribbled:

Like usual, Alluring, your words have hit me, sledge hammer like, in the brain, stunning me, without me being able to verbalize exactly what happened. ... ;) .. Wow!

12 / 11 / 2008

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alluringbette scribbled:

... thanks as always ...

12 / 22 / 2008

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alluringbette Scribbled:
...thank you so much for this tip... fantastic!!!
10 / 19 / 2008
alluringbette Scribbled:
Actually, this is a bit confusing, however, must read word per word. My writing are emotions once hidden within ones self, finally surfacing and facing the demons hidden, which I actually hid, for such the great actress that I am,.. i find releasing all sentiments of negativity makes one's attitude transmute pessimistic thoughts into a loving harmonious reality..

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10 / 11 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
...unbelievable vocals, phenomenal, pleasing to the senses... what can i say, divinely gifted... shall message via email for more thoughts... thanks for this beautiful sound...
10 / 06 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
all right... comments welcome you said, correct? most importantly, and i am also guilty of this, always use spelling and grammar checker on your computer... it'll break up your sentences better making your readers comprehend a bit better... otherwise, intro is great, and loved sentence "feral gangs of survivors stalk ...", extremely descriptive. The 4 key words used certainly caught my interest... well, that's just me anyway... due to the apparent definition of the word "feral"... well, thanks for letting me comment...
09 / 28 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
Touché ... Touché ... Touché ... is what came to mind ... strong view and excellent point!
09 / 28 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
... very sweet and to the point ... loved it!!!
09 / 28 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
BRAVO!!! Question for you if I may... how long did it take you to compose this short story? And second question, do the words somehow fluidly appear in the visionary mind then conveyed into writing? Very well written... use of diction with such strong distinctive phraseology makes your story visually lucid as though watching from the eyes on an eagle.
09 / 28 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
very interesting...
09 / 28 / 2008
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alluringbette Scribbled:
Wow... deep ... must digest ... ANGST ... the sadness, the emptiness, the sorrows ... your belief, your honesty, your time ... yet there is a very positive feeling, energy, emotion one senses of openness, forgiveness, freedom ... ... die before you die ... transformation ... transmutation ... new beginnings ... peace be within ... bill, must say this touches the soul...

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08 / 31 / 2008