allyourbase50 scribbled:
damnit why do the pages end up all messed up, the fonts arent right, the dedication isnt supposed to be in the disclamier. WTF MAN?
zihjwe scribbled:
descriptions could be written better, with more detail and different words. you use the word various quite alot. however it has potential if you go in and reword it.
an incomplete version of my zombie book that im planning to publish. send me comments reccomending things. do it fast .cause i wont be able to do a...
beefharbor scribbled:
You show promise.. but everything was too generic.. to used before... I liked the c4 guitar tho.. How did they get the C4? You might have used the word zombie a few too many times.. and some thing...