Reader reviews for His Dark Embrace

Review courtesy of Dark Faerie TalesQuick & Dirty: For fans of old school tame vampire romance. His Dark Embrace is a story that just doesn’t seem to know where it wants to go and will leave readers struggling to find a plot.Opening Sentence: When Skylynn O’Brien McNamara came home to bury her grandfather and settle his estate, she was surprised to see that the house across the street was still vacant.The Review:Skylynn McNamara is used to tragedy in her life. Her parents and grandmother died when she was young. Her brother is currently missing in action in Iraq and now she has returned back to her childhood home to bury her grandfather. Sky runs into Kaiden Thorne, her childhood crush and the man who lives across the street from her grandfather. Kaiden has also recently returned to town, looking the find the recipe that allows him to appear and feel human. Unfortunately Sky’s grandfather has taken the recipe to the grave. Kaiden races to find the recipe before he reverts back to his vampiric self.Sky enjoys the time her a Kaiden have gotten to know each other. She decides to leave her life, apartment in Chicago, a boyfriend she never really loved and her job at a lawyer’s office to be with Kaiden. It doesn’t take her long to see through Kaiden’s ruse but does she love him enough to stay by his side.I struggled through His Dark Embrace. The plot meander’s from one point to another. Conflicts are added many chapters in just to prolong the storyline. The relationship part of the story could have ended the book at Chapter 20, while the main plot point of finding the recipe seems to be forgotten for the majority of the rest of the novel while dealing with a brother with amnesia to prolonged revenge from an old enemy. It felt like these elements were added just to make the story longer.Normally I don’t have any problems with age in a vampire book. A four hundred year old vampire or even eighty year old vampire is going to be much older than the twenty or thirty year old they hook up with. Skylyn is currently in her mid-twenties and I never really think about the age difference but she had a crush on Kaiden since she was an awkward teenager. The only problem that leaves me a little squeamish is when Kaiden says he’s loved her since she was a little kid and it doesn’t come off as protective friend but a little creepy but maybe I just read too much into it.Overall, His Dark Embrace is a strange and slow read. I have read Amanda Ashley novels in the past and loved them but this novel would not be among my favorites. I would recommend His Dark Embrace to those readers who are new to romance and don’t want to read any sex.Notable Scene:Throne drained his glass and put it aside. The wine warmed him, but it was as nothing compared to the heat Sky’s nearness aroused in him. How exquisite she looked, with the fire’s glow pinking her cheeks and gilding her hair. The steady beat of her heart was like music to his ears, the flowery scent of her perfume, the scent of the woman herself, sweetly alluring.She was beautiful.She was desirable.She was here.Alone.In his house.And she had what he so desperately craved.FTC Advisory: Kensington/Zebra provided me with a copy of His Dark Embrace. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review.
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Review courtesy of All Things Urban FantasyThere’s something very old fashioned about Amanda Ashley’s vampire romances. The time periods are often nominally modern with characters and dialog that seem more suited to historical settings. There’s a charm in this approach for readers looking for a nostalgic flavor with their paranormal romances. In the case of HIS DARK EMBRACE, that nostalgia wasn’t quite enough to compensate for a somewhat bland story.The premise was appealing enough with a women returning to her childhood home and finding the older neighbor she grew up loving still there…and somehow doesn’t look any older. Suddenly the hot neighbor is looking at her as a woman and passion quickly sweeps the two away. There were a couple uncomfortable moments where Kaiden remembered Sky ask a child and later as a developing teen, but fortunately those were few and far between. In typical Ashley fashion, the romantic plot quickly gives way to supernatural suspense when a vengeful vampire hunter comes after Kaiden and a formula that lets him live as a human. That’s unfortunately where the story really floundered for me.The romance was basically resolved by then, so the introduction of a villain didn’t really feel all that harrowing, especially since he mostly filled his chapters with plotting revenge but not actually taking any action. To further drag down the story, Sky’s MIA brother shows up and has an equally uninspired side plot.If HIS DARK EMBRACE had stuck jut to the main romance storyline, and maybe gone for novella length, it would have been a sweet, subtly sexy story that I would have enjoyed (despite the somewhat weepy heroine). But with the toothless villain and boring brother story thrown in, the book just left me a little underwhelmed.Sexual Content:Non graphic sex scenes/references
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