kathleenfitz scribbled: Love the title. Incredibly creative poetry! 09/03/2009

JedDiamondPhD scribbled: I like the cutting edge and truth in what you're writing. Reminds me of some of my dark nights as I wrestled with my own bipolar demons. 09/03/2009

amiblackwelder scribbled: love this 09/04/2009

Antipost scribbled: ich mag den ungezwungenen stil, das tempo und das fehlende pathos.. eine art zu schreiben, die mir sehr gefällt.. beste grüße 09/22/2009

usedsaints scribbled: True to a mark, dark, but with substance. Pain comes to the surface to be let out. A time for you a time. Looking creates a awave that sends somethings away. Somehtings away and westward bound. 09/30/2009

EasyWind scribbled: very cool, i especially enjoyed manic state, and a tempting fate awaits 07/09/2009

scruff09 scribbled: manic state struck a chord. good stuff. the learning journey goes on without knowing the destination and not wanting to. cheers. jcmarini. 08/17/2009

DamonReynolds scribbled: sub for sub? 09/04/2009

The Well Fed Artists scribbled: arizona sucks, huh? 09/17/2009

Ideal Champ scribbled: "Doldrums of Madness" greatly affects my soul in which your reality on life pounds true. Keep expressing. 10/19/2009

Scott Donwerth scribbled: Who keeps reading this shit? This is garbage, angst from the mind of an adolescent. We get it, you're depressed, go get some paxil or xanex or whatever and get over it sport. Anyone who likes this ... 10/28/2009

June A scribbled: I agree with Izzygumbo; life is a mess and we can't always get it out in one sentence. The author never said he was writing about Goldilocks and the 3 bears. Bitter does what it says on the tin. 10/31/2009

wordweaver scribbled: Wow! Your poetry is revealing and a new and foreign perspective of sybarite pleasures. 06/24/2009