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Varying Sentence Structure
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© 2001 by Ruth Luman
 
Add
ing Variety to Sentence Structure
To make your writing more interesting,you should try to vary your sentences interms of length and structure. You canmake some of your sentences long andothers short. Read the two paragraphson the next page.
 
Tw
o Paragraphs
Rea
d
the paragraphs belo
w.
Choose theparagraph that is more effective
.
I
love living in the city.
I
have a wonderful view of theentire city.
I
have an apartment.
I
can see the GoldenGate Bridge.
I
can see many cargo ships pass under thebridge each day.
I
like the restaurants in San Francisco.
I
 can find wonderful food from just about every country.
I
 don¶t like the traffic in the city.
I
love living in the city of San Francisco.
I
have awonderful view of the entire city from my apartmentwindow.
I
n addition,
I
can see the Golden Gate Bridgeunder which many cargo ships pass each day.
I
also likeSan Francisco because
I
can find wonderful restaurantswith food from just about every country; however,
I
don¶tlike the traffic in the city.
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