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cunni162 scribbled: I agree with Christine, the placement of your charts and figures interferes with the flow of the report. I would redistribute them throughout. Your definition of "Intel Core 2 Duo Processor" reads more like an advertisement than a definition. You might consider defining it by comparing it to a similar speed single core processor. Other than that, this looks good!
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Lindsey Hines Feasibility Report

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Feasibility Report of Laptop Computer Purchase for Mark Stanaszek / _________________________ _________

04/22/2009
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fitz0307
cunni162 scribbled: Your capitalization of the words "elliptical," "treadmill," and "exercise bike" are inconsistent. In your intro, "its" does not need an apostrophe. Your terms and chart are wonderful; they clarify a lot of the information and present it in an easy-to-use format.
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Feasibility Study 2

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An Elliptical? An Exercise Bike? or A Treadmill? / Feasibility Report By: Jessica Fitzsimmons April 21

04/22/2009
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olsen3397909
cunni162 scribbled: This is so well-organized and really thorough! I'm not sure if we need a works cited page or not, but thanks for reminding me I need to put citations in mine too. I might be wrong, but I think the Letter of Transmittal should go before the Table of Contents but after the cover. It might just be the way scribd formatted your document, but I think putting a page break before the "Conclusions" section would look better, as your table wouldn't be broken up.
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Olsen_Christine Feasibility Report

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I still need to figure out how to cite everything. Do you guys know if we need a works cited page or something?

04/15/2009
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cunni162 scribbled: I've tried deleting and reuploading this several times, as well as saving it to other formats, and I can't get the Table of Contents to show no matter what. It's there if you download the report as a .doc.
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Feasibility

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Allison Cunningham April 10, 2009 / Evaluation of 7th Generation Video Game Console Purchasing Option

04/11/2009
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Feasibility

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Allison Cunningham April 10, 2009 / Evaluation of 7th Generation Video Game Console Purchasing Option

04/11/2009
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cunni162 scribbled: I've tried deleting and reuploading this several times, as well as saving it to other formats, and I can't get the Table of Contents to show no matter what. It's there if you download the report as... 04/11/2009

olsen3397909

olsen3397909 scribbled: haha. the first part of your letter of transmittal is funny. like your report, especially the useful terms section. I have know idea what anything means in video game terminology, so it's helpf... 04/16/2009

hine00975975

hine00975975 scribbled: Hey Allison this looks really great! It is incredibly neat a professional looking. I also like your table it looks very sharp with the bolding :) Just a few comments 1. In the Scope of this re... 04/20/2009

fitz0307

fitz0307 scribbled: Hi Allison! This is well organized and very thorough! -the terms were very helpful -table was a great way to show comparison between the three systems -I would agree adding backwards compatabl... 04/21/2009

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hine00975975
cunni162 scribbled: The only suggestion I can come up with is to add something to the question about special features like "will these features raise the price of the computer, and if so, by how much?" to make sure you stay on-budget. Otherwise, looks very thorough.
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Lindsey Hines Interviewing Questions

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Lindsey Hines Interviewing questions Research Goal: During the interview process I hope to find the

03/26/2009
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cunni162 scribbled: I might add a question about how long most organizations run the same ad. In one case it might be a matter of days, while in another it might be a matter of weeks or months, which might give you an idea of how long it typically takes for the position to be filled. However, I'm not really sure if most papers would have this information readily available or not.
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Olsen Christing Interview

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Interview Goal: I am collecting data on advertising forums for the administrator of a long term care

03/26/2009
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cunni162 scribbled: I would make sure to add "and why"s at the end of most of your questions, particularly if you're going to be interviewing online. It might also be worth asking the professionals you're emailing about the value of the equipment for its price, if there's a significant price difference between any of the machines you're considering.
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Jessica Fitzsimmons Interview Questions

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Research Goal: I hope to receive wide variety of information about three particular pieces of cardio

03/26/2009
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cunni162 scribbled: That's really weird... I assure you the Table of Contents shows up on the version on my computer. I should have double-checked it after uploading.
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Planning Proposal - Allison Cunningham

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Selection of a Video Game System: Proposal for a Feasibility Study Allison Cunningham / Introducti

03/12/2009
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cunni162 scribbled: In your introduction: "...what computer brand and model is the best fit for him at a specific location..." Maybe I'm not reading this correctly, but "at a specific location" doesn't make a lot of sense in this context. I would consider adding a "base price" row to your table on pages 4-5, as you mention this is an important consideration to your decision maker. In your Call to Action, I think you meant "pursued" and not "perused." Otherwise, this looks pretty good... you did a much better job at being concise than I did!
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Lindsey Hines Planning Proposal

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Feasibility of Laptop Computer Purchase for Mark Stanaszek: Planning Proposal / Created by: Lindsey Hi

03/12/2009
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Planning Proposal - Allison Cunningham

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Selection of a Video Game System: Proposal for a Feasibility Study Allison Cunningham / Introducti

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hine00975975

hine00975975 scribbled: Hey Allison.. looked over your report here are a few of my comments 1. There are two blank pages between your cover page and Introduction... there is supposed to be a table of contents there :) 2... 03/12/2009

cunni162

cunni162 scribbled: That's really weird... I assure you the Table of Contents shows up on the version on my computer. I should have double-checked it after uploading. 03/12/2009

olsen3397909

olsen3397909 scribbled: Good work. I liked how you were able to limit your topic in the Items Covered by this Study section. You justified your decisions well. Looks good. 03/12/2009

fitz0307

fitz0307 scribbled: Hi Allison! Your report looks really good- you picked some great points to cover and were well stated in your research strategies. I am excited to see the outcome of your study! 03/13/2009

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olsen3397909
cunni162 scribbled: This looks good. Very well-organized, clear, and concise. My only suggestion is to replace the titles "Introduction" and "Body" with something more specific to your proposal.
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Olsen Christin Planning Proposal

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question: what exactly is a statement of organization?

03/09/2009
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4 Feasibility Questionnaire

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Feasibility Study Project  Questionnaire / 1. What is the purpose of th e project?  What question  do yo

02/27/2009
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hine00975975

hine00975975 scribbled: Looks good :) I will be interested to see how this turns out... I am definately a Wii fan! 03/02/2009

fitz0307

fitz0307 scribbled: Hi there! I know this is a late post but I think your topic is very interesting and I will be interested to see what your interviewees have to say about each system. I have heard a lot of positiv... 03/03/2009

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hine00975975
cunni162 scribbled: I agree with Jessica and Christine; you might want to narrow down the field of options before going ahead with this. Other than that, it looks good!
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Lindsey Hines Feasibility_questionnaire[1]

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Feasibility Study Project  Questionnaire / 1. What is the purpose of th e project?  What question  do yo

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