tanvikhandelwal

awesome story. I really like this story.

rangel de

muito legal, parabéns... se vc entender português

palwassha

well interesting end with parent,s name june & april,it made them more interesting keep it up regrds Pal

Lutralune

Hi Trip. I thought this was good. I liked how you had Monday, Tuesday and Sunday speak when they throw the potion into the air

mpsmilie_171607

nice story.. it made me laugh keep it up!:)

anne_gabrielle

good story....

IPAE09

Nice man, very good!

razoryo231004

great story..u shoud publish it

Leo sun

nice story

Bijoufem

Hi my name is Jewel - your submission was quiet inspiring, an inspiration for others to enjoy reading and writing. Cheers and shouts, especially with encouragement – enjoyed the read many thanks. Regards Jewel

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girlinblack1012

nice story Trip!

Pamela Jean Hunt

CHANG THEY HAD DONE THE WHOLE THING TO;IN ALL THE ENTIRE RESCUE TOOK ONLY... THIS IS A GREAT CHILDRENS STORY,YOU WOULD SELL THIS TO RANDOM HOUSE/CROWN BOOKS BUT PLEASE DONT GET UPSET WHEN I SAY THAT ENDING HAS TO CHANGE!

thuanthanh

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