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    Children's behaviour seems to be getting worse. Both schools and parents need to work together to improve the situation. Steps need to be taken to tackle the problem.

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    Children's behaviour seems to be getting worse. Both schools and parents need to work together to improve the situation. Steps need to be taken to tackle the problem.

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    Children's behaviour seems to be getting worse. Both schools and parents need to work together to improve the situation. Steps need to be taken to tackle the problem.

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    Introduction Problem & Solution Essay: It is true that children's behaviour seems to be getting worse.

    There are various reasons for this, and both schools and parents need to work together to improve the situation. Or
    1.

    It is undeniable that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and whole species of plants and animals are disappearing. There are several causes of this alarming trend, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem.
    Note: In the second sentence you don't need to give any causes or solutions; save your ideas for the main paragraphs. 2. Discussion (& Opinion) Essay:

    People have different views about how children should be taught. While there are some good arguments in favour of teaching children to be competitive, I believe that it is better to encourage cooperation. 3. Balanced view: (Agree/disagree): To a certain extent I agree that the role of schools is to prepare children to be productive members of society. However, I also believe that the education process has a positive impact on us as individuals.

    Conclusion From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary, however, its method should be improved. 1. Opinion For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that... (+ repeat your opinion). Or For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that.. 2. Discussion (+ Opinion) In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against... (topic), but I believe that... (if the question asks for your opinion). 3. Advantages and Disadvantages In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of... (topic) outweigh the drawbacks. 4. Problem and Solution In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for... (topic), and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem. (Or in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on ....) Some simple alternatives to "firstly, secondly, finally" could be: The main reason why I believe... is... / Another argument is... / Also,... One problem is that... / Furthermore,... / Another drawback is that... From a business perspective,... / In terms of education,... / From a social point of view,...

    1. 2. 3.

    1. On the one hand, (I accept that)... 2. On the other hand, (I believe that)... 3. We should solve the problems that we are confrontedfacedwith. 4. It plays an important role in our life. 5. Despite these obvious benefits, also, there are good reasons to........

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