xxVampiresRulexx

u should write more from Alice's point of view

yuriana18

plz email me a copy ...yurianawilliams@yahoo.com you are amazing i loved it....

sqweewee123

a legit place that has it: http://redropes.com Looks all scammy, streams fast so whatev..didn't give me a virus or anything which is rare

kholdaway9100

i agree that you should not have used bad words.overall a good document

pinkluloo

what can i say girl but your good. you should get a hold of Stephanie Meyer and show her your Alice P.O.V. I'm sure she'll love it. another thing i'm not too sure you should swear because the books don't have bad words. fyi... but good job.

carmela~

i really loved it.

Candie18

This is really good. I enjoyed reading it...

riarika

could you please e-mail this to me.... it is really good.. ria_rika26@yahoo.com

bigmatt_62189

Great, absolutly great! unexpected language but good. A few mistakes in punctuation and wording but overall good. P.S Your like a new Stephanie Meyer...TTYL

jeffwelch

There's only one legitimate place I've found to watch it, the rest seem like scams :-/ You can watch it over here though: http://vostuu.com/newmoon.html They make you do a little survey but after that it's good to go :)

Rakel.Peterson

Ok guys! I have the week off, I realized that there are a few errors in this plot line i.e the car, sorry guys I wrote this at 5am remember- obviously the brain was working right =] I will fix the errors and have an update posted within the week is up xx

vultere3

WERE IS THE REST I WANT TO FINISH IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE!!!!!!!! EMAIL ME BACK AT EARTH.TO.KATIE@HOTMAIL.COM

isaura79

Awsome... now i need more. Where is the rest? Please continue!!!!!

Ipebble

could u email me this? please? books_looks@hotmail.com

nichole93

please write more