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Eagleton: “A poem is a fictional, verbally inventive moral statement in which it is the author,
rather than the printer or word processor, who decides where the lines should end.”
Lines and sentences, the sentences either actual or implied. The lines are usually chosen to
enact some rhythm, either according to an invisible scheme, called a meter, or, in Ezra
Pound’s words, “the idea clothes itself naturally in an appropriate novelty of rhythm.”
- Formal: Could be metrical (i.e., the same number of stresses per line) or adhere to
some other formal constraint.
- Free: A bad term. As Eliot says, no verse is free if it’s any good. The meaning
here is that the lines are not bound by a conventional form.
The main thing is LINE and SYNTAX.
Lines sometimes work with the parts of
a sentence, and sometimes they work
against. The poet chooses where the
lines are to be broken, or the form
chooses it for her.
Syntax (& Diction):
“The world is charged with the grandeur of God.”
“Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth, upon this continent, a new nation,
conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.”
“I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons
of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.”
I have a dream that former slaves’ sons and former slave owners’
sons will be able to sit down together one day at the table of brotherhood on the red
hills of Georgia.
Line
Each of these samples follows a metrical arrangement of a certain number of beats per line. Most of these beats in these examples
come in the form of an iambic foot, which is a two-syllable measure in which the second syllable is more acoustically prominent
than the first syllable. An example of an iambic foot is the word “about.” Say it aloud to hear it. Another common two-syllable foot
is the trochee, which reverses the stress position. The word “broken” is an example. Again, say it aloud and listen.
“Free” verse:
You are as gold
as the half-ripe grain
that merges to gold again,
as white as the white rain
that beats through
the half-opened flowers
of the great flower tufts
thick on the black limbs
of an Illyrian apple bough.
~
I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you.
A Roman had an
artist, a freedman,
contrive a cone--pine-cone
or fir-cone--with holes for a fountain. Placed on
the Prison of St. Angelo, this cone
of the Pompeys which is known
of Thebes. ….
~
A “syllabic” line means the number of syllables per line in a given stanza is fixed. In the above stanzas, lines 1 & 2 contain five syllables
each, line 3 has six syllables, line 4 has eleven syllables, line 5 has ten syllables, and line 6 has seven syllables.
Music (In Moore’s poetry, it often bursts out unexpectedly in the midst of the prose-like sentences):
I remember a swan under the willows in Oxford,
with flamingo-colored, maple-
leaflike feet. It reconnoitered like a battle-
ship. Disbelief and conscious fastidiousness were
ingredients in its
disinclination to move. Finally its hardihood was
not proof against its
proclivity to more fully appraise such bits
of food as the stream
“Poetry is something which is done to us, not just said to us. The meaning of its
words is closely bound up with the experience of them.”
- Terry Eagleton, p. 21