Fanpire13

Wow. I know i'm not the first to say this but that was amazing :)

ilytwilight123

WOW! this is good....plz continue!

bella maurice

this is relly great

Kayla_1012

wow. this is amazing. i cant wait to read more

bethany_lewis

wow this is freakin awesome keep writing you should write one about after breakin dawn and name it somthing

preshuss

did u write these i thought it was really stephaine meyer your amazing

bbluv

awesome keep riting plz!!!!!!!!!!!!

ainsleykm99

wow. it good. cant wait to read more :)

PheonixCJN

I will post more, I promise its just been really hard lately. But i promise i will.

claraputri

hey come on write another chapter,, i really like your story. i like that the story is from bella view rather than jacob's view.. pls write some more,, you can email me at utiajah@yahoo.com.. pls,, i'll wait it,,

sugarnympha

Oh please write some more, it's great!

WrterMe101

What's up with this (not that I don't like it! It's soo cool)???

lynda_solmayor

very, very promising... how about finishing it? that would be great, right?!?

Habba_Drabba

KEEP GOING!!! PLEASE?

Madymae95

can you please finsh it. i would be in great thanks. :D