FADE IN:
INT. BUICK - 'BURBS - THROUGH BINOCULARS - DAYUNFOCUSED TO FOCUSED ON LOKA, a Mary K. Cosmetics saleswomanas fine as she wants to be.
Purse on one arm, she carries a suitcase like it weighs air,sets the case down on the curb. Smooths her stockings overfair skin.Poofs her hair.
Licks, puckers blueberry lips.
She grabs the case-handle and moves up the pathway to a RITZYHOUSE. She reaches into her purse, reveals a PISTOL. Andknocks on the door.She
SAM GUM (O.C.)My God she's deadly.EXT. HIGHLAND INN - DAYSAM GUM, AFRICAN-AMERICAN, driving, wearing his trade markray bans, jeans, and white tee pulls into the Highland Innparking lot.GUM (V.O.)She's so beautiful you'd forget:pump your brakes, take that sharpturn kinda slow. Fly right off thecliff.
He parks, waits.GUM (V.O.) (CONT'D)That woman is sugarcane.EXT. SIDEWALK - GRAFFITI MURAL - DAY
Gum and Loka lean on a graffiti mural eating ice-cream.Loka looks uninterested, more fascinated by the waffle cone.GUM (V.O.)Every time we're together shepretends she's never met me. Andevery time --
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