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Hot/Cold
a work of the seventh son
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INT – SETH’S CAR – NIGHTSeth is going to be sitting outside of the movie theater inhis car. He’s going to sit and watches “the happy couples”go inside. The entire scene is only going to be three shots.Shot #1 is going to be in the backseat of the car with Sethin the driver’s seat on the left of the frame. The right ofthe frame will be empty aside from the headrest; we can makeout people moving in front of the car through thewindshield. Shot #2 is a low-angle CU of Seth’s profile. Hewill do two things at different times in this setup. Firsthe will light a cigarette and second, he will look at hiswatch. Shot #3 is a long shot of the movie theater; we canmake out the people that are moving around much easier. Ithink that there should be a song playing on the radio,possibly Stan Getz & Astrid Gilberto’s “Girl from Ipanema”or Tom Waits “On the Road” or one of The Black Keys’ “You’rethe One,“Strange Desire” or “Act Nice and Gentle.Hereis the order for the shots:a. backseatb. long shot of couples and a group of friendsc. CU of Seth, he lights the cigd. long shote. backseatf. long shotg. CU of Seth, checks watchh. long shoti. backseat, starts car and leavesOPENING CREDITSIt would be nice if the opening song could be the CountFive’s “Psychotic Reaction” or Howlin’ Wolf’s “I Asked ForWater” or Kris Kristofferson’s “Help Me Make It Through TheNight”INT – SETH’S APARTMENT – NIGHTSeth is in his apartment when he gets a call from Greg. Theapartment is dark; Seth is lying in bed listening to theradio or a cd (Hopefully Kris Kristopherson’s “Loving HerWas Easier.” This will present the idea that this and theopening song are back to back on the cd. It gives somecontinuity.) The phone rings.
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SETHHey.GREGWhat are you doin’?SETHNothing, listening to music,trying to take a nap.GREGAre you three years old? Don’ttake a nap.SETHSometimes my batteries needrecharged.GREGYou know who says that?Faggots.SETHI guess that makes me a faggot.GREGYou just called yourself afaggot.SETHWhatever. What do you want?GREGNot male cock like you. Are yougoing to that party?SETHI don’t know. I doubt it. Ireally don’t want to leave thehouse.GREGDude, you need to.SETHI kinda want to, but “Night ofthe Iguana” is on TV.
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