taufik fathony

what is this

Danneekah

its was good but kinda basic and simple something you would read to ur child to get them to go to sleep but its was pretty good

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....it's cute story....

ty55

ummmmm...............i dont think wev e met but ur my freidn now by the way d=gteat strory

veroanique

Real trippy!

shai_shai

This work merits a 'lol'. Very cute. :D

colorwriter

Great work man, I might read this to my little niece and nephew! Very creative and easy to read. You've got skills just keep it up and thanks for the friend request!

ATHINA_RO

Interesting story! I have a lot of questions related to the names of the characters and the symbolic use of numbers 3 and 7.

Diamond Explorer

I liked it. Mystical, Magical, Quick and to the point. Awesome!

footprintz

The story was week dude!! lol Nah serious tho the sort of story you make up when you need to get that little one off to sleep and can't be bothered to read thro the trad one's. it has all the elements of every well known fairy tale so who needs too much detail, they know how it all goes anywayz. Wanka & Booz? would'nt wanna give them any ideas they're likely to come up with anyway, so i'd name change those. You appear to have a fast paced mind buzzing with ideas which you put into action leaving details up to others. Rock on buddy.

eogain

Don't give up the day job.

Lanna Tetryakova

aww, nice story! I like it :)

madden777

nice happy ending story,,,

rolandouranga

Your "Seven Dragons" is an amazing story!

zucalaczio

Speaking from the point of view of a writer, if you wish to publish this (which I recommend, if you could just develop the plot a little further and lengthen the story) get yourself an agent and put it forwards as a children's book... However, this is totally up to you. No pressure, but you have talent - don't waste it - enjoy it - very few people have potential or talent - you do!!! Best wishes for the future... Black Diamond - author of the 'Defiance Saga'