Revision: Green= Taken out Yellow =Added to paper Saidah McKissick Ms.CarusoENGL 110209 April 2013Memo: As geography major, this topic is nothing strange to me. There are disparities in obesity amongdifferent socioeconomic statuses but what which people are actually the overweight ones? Is thishappening only in America? No, it's happening in Asia, Middle and Latin America, Africa and theMiddle East, as well as Europe. I think it's important for people to know why this is happening and towhom. My audience is mostly anyone that does not have any knowledge of why socioeconomics playsa very large role in obesity; not only in the United States but as well as countries abroad. I think thatmy main target are unsuspecting students because they are more likely not to know anything aboutsocioeconomics.I intend to use a blog, such as one on the popular blogging site Tumblr. Tumblr isnotorious for spreading information that people did not know and informing the uninformed opening their eyes to the world around them.
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