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Mrs. Chiodo
3/24/08
Finally, the morning I had waited for all thistime. With summer almost over, I
headed off to college. For months I had looked forward to this, and the time had
finally arrived. I hardly got a wink of sleep the previous night, and we had packed
the car with all the things I had started buying months ago, including a year’s worth
back there. It took up the whole trunk and back seat of my dad’s black sedan.
After saying a tearful goodbye to mom and hugging my little sister, and
promising to call every night, dad and I finally got in his anguishedcar and pulled
out. College campus stood a long way off, a seven hour drive from home. I read
most of the time, summer reading required for all incoming freshmen. God, they
give us some boring books. But even though I read, my mind could not be foundin
the pages of their mind-numbing book; how could I possibly think about anything
but what lay just a few hours ahead of me? I was about to begina totally new
experience. I had never spent much time away from my parents except for a few
days here and there, for summer campsand whatnot. I know I’m going to miss my
parents, but pretty much everyone does sometime, so I should turn out all right.
After seven tedious hours on the highway, full of grumbling and complaining
about the other pinhead drivers out here, we finally arrivedat college. A man
showed us to my roomand we unload all my stuff. My room looked tiny, and with
my entire wardrobe stuffed into garbage bags and cardboard boxes, I hadno idea
how it will all fit into the meager space afforded to my freshman dorm room. I
decided that I would have to work out later though; for now, I have to head down to
completely by surprise to see another student already there. This wasn’t just any
student; I knew that at first sight. He looked at me with a goofy grin and said, quite
much worse does it get? I tried to force a smile, which came out more as a grimace,
and introduced myself. Chuckie’s stuff looked like his mother hadpacked with a
flashbang grenade in the middle, and he simply pulled the pin to unpack. Both
sides of the room were covered with Chuckie clothes; Chuckie high socks, Chuckie
“Hey, uh, Chuckie? Would you mind getting some of your stuff off my bed?”
“Oh. Sorry ‘bout all that” he said, and trundled over to retrieve his Pokémon
shrapnel. But instead of taking it to his side of the room, he simply brushed it on
the floor and kicked it under the bed. I decided not to press the issue for now, and
“Dude, what are you doing tonight?” Chuckie’s irritating voice pierced
“Really? That sounds sad. You should totally come out with me tonight to
this sick party I’m going to. It’s gonna be intense, tons of hot chicks and beer.
“You can’t go through college without having fun, you know. This iswhere it
all happens. I have friends who went to college last year, and they said the more
“No, I’m really okay. There will be plenty of other nights to party. I have work
to do tonight.”
“You’re just making excuses. You don’t have the guts to go out and meet
some people and do the crazy things that people do at college parties!”
That set me off. “I am not afraid! I told you, I have things I need to do. Now
party!”
“OKAY. Fine. I’ll go to your little party, and then you can never say that I’m
“Good. It starts at ten, but most people will get there around eleven. I can
“Fine.”
We arrived at 10:45. The party started at a fraternity house, and there were
already over fifty people there. I walked in with Chuckie, who was dressed in his
best Hawaiian shirt, a baseball cap, tight jeans and a pair of worn, cracking cowboy
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boots. I wondered if we would be taken as a gay couple; the thought horrified me. I
The inside of the house smelled strongly of smoke, with an obnoxious mix of
bad music and people yelling and laughing. Most of the people loungedaround
drinking who knows what. I found my way to what was apparently the kitchen,
although I couldhardly distinguishable as one. The floor bowed under the weight of
six kegs of beer, and there were people serving hard liquor and cigars. I decided
that I would look foolish walking around with a soda, so I helped myself to a cup of
Upon leaving the kitchen, I found myself caught in the midst of a swarm of
people dancing to the terrible music that blaredfrom bad-quality speakers. I tried to
walk through the crowd, but quickly lost hope of that. I turned around, only to find
myself completely disoriented in the low light. I had completed my second full turn
around when someone grabbed my hand, and before I knew it, I found myself
directly behind some girl, who had a beer in her hand and had begun
until the end of the song. So I waited. And waited. And finally, I began to lose hope
of the song ever ending. I decided this was not too bad, though, and by time the
seemingly endless song finally came to an end, I wasn’t so anxious to get away
anymore.
At the end of the song I turned to leave, but she held onto my hand and
wouldn’t let go. She trailed me as I found my way out of the dancing room and back
into the kitchen. I tossed my cup in the trash and she followed suit, before turning
Before then, I hadn’t seen this girl’s face. She was striking. I stuttered for a
“Cool. So I think we should grab another beer and then meet my friends
Hanging onto my hand like her life depended on it, Steph put two cups on a
small clear spot on the table and poured us both a beer. Then she handed me mine
We found even more people partying outside than we had left inside. The
number of people at the party had grown exponentially since Chuckie and I had
arrived; I wondered how he had made out, and then decided not to think about him.
It proved almost as loud outside as it wasinside. A hot tub stood around the side of
the house that I had not noticed before and at least fifteen people had jammed into
it. Behind that, farther into the back yard, a huge bonfire burned. Someone had
arranged lawn chairs around it and also near the hot tub, and the people that
wasmostly dark out, other than a light over the hot tub and the fire burning in the
back corner. The stench of smoke filled the air, all kinds of smoke.
Steph took me to the bonfire. One of the guys standing there noticed us walk
up, and called to her. We walked over to him, and Steph introduced me to Nick.
Nick appearedtall and lanky, and needed to shave badly. He talked slowly, without
enunciating much, and was smoking a cigar with one hand and drinking a Heineken
with the other. After my introduction, Steph grabbed the cigar out of his hand and
took a long drag. She let it out quickly and took another one, before sticking the
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cigar into my free hand. “Oh, I don’t smoke,” I said, smiling a little bit and pushing
“Well you do now,” she replied with a wide smile, and winked. “Don’t worry,
Oh, what the hell I thought, and stuck the thing between my lips and
proceeded to inhale rather deeply through it. But as soon as the cigar left my
mouth I started to gag violently. Steph giggled. “You’ll get it. Try again in a few
minutes.” I didn’t think I feltabout ready to try again; my eyes were watering and I
had a nasty taste in my mouth. But after Nick and Steph each took another hit, my
turn came around and I thought that having gagged once was bad enough, I
probably should not make myself look dumb again. So I gave it another try, and did
not do as badly this time; just a little cough at the end. Steph smiled and passed it
around again, and by my third turn I was gaining confidence and smoking smoothly.
After our little chain smoke, Steph informed me that I wasgoing with her into
the hot tub. I was notso sure about that. “I want to go back inside,” I said rather
lamely, “I have to find my roommate, he’s driving me back. And I don’t even have a
Steph smiled. “Neither do I,” she said, and without further ado, pulled me to
the overflowing hot tub. Not knowing how to resist, I again gave in to her. Before I
knew it, I had stripped down to my boxers and I was sitting on a ledge in the tub,
wedged between a couple of girls to my right and another guy to my left. Steph did
Rightabout this time I started to feel a little bit fuzzy. I struggled to think, and
I suddenly realized that the cigar I had smoked was not at all just a cigar. It
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definitely had something other than tobacco in it. The people in the tub carried on
several different conversations simultaneously, and I could not entirely follow any of
them. At one point, Steph got up and got us both another beer. She may have
done this several times, although from that point on, I never had a full recollection
of the details of what happened. We sat in the hot tub for a while, maybe forty-five
minutes, talking and drinking and laughing a lot. It had gotten quite late, and well
After we got out of the hot tub and wiggled back into our clothes, we
zigzagged back into the house. After a trip back to the kitchen for more beer, we
collapsed on a couch together, laughing, Steph on my lap. A girl with a tray of shot
glasses walked past, and Steph snatched two and downed one, before feeding one
to me. We talked a little bit, but while I attempted to say something relating to
baby penguins, she leaned over and kissed me, full on the mouth. I do not
remember much right after that, until about half an hour later, after we had found
roommate, in a small apartment. Her roommate had gone out tonight though, gone
out with a friend and Steph did notexpected back until morning. She lead me
inside, and we stumbled through the apartment to her bedroom. I do not remember
what happened after that, until I woke up the next morning to the return of Steph’s
angry roommate banging on the door to our room. I got myself up and just made it
to the bathroom in time to vomit in the toilet. Half-conscious, I made my way back
to the bedroom and realized for the first time that morning that Steph was in the
same bed I had just gotten out of, and that’s when the night before all came rushing
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back to me… my first day at college. It definitely did not go as expected; it was way
better than that. I need to add Pepto Bismol to my college purchases for next year.
Oh, and find a new roommate. According to Steph, Chuckie isone of the biggest