Coma (Working Title)

By Sam Thomas, Wil Nelson and Joe Shrimpton

Post Production Script – 24th March 2009

SWJ Productions
Ilkley Grammar School
Cowpasture road
Ilkley
LS29 7QF
Tel: 01943678854
Fax: 01943675443
Email: Samt2992@gmail.com
Opening: SWJ Logo
Heartbeat is heard to Credits on Black
Feet are standing still on screen
Heartbeat again to credits on black
Feet start walking
Credits on black with heartbeat, again.
Flash up of the girl. Feet continue walking but with
car driving sound in background.
Screen goes black and car tyre screech is heard.
Heartbeat is now faster.

Woman: Loomis, loomis wake up, wake up!

1. Int: School Staircase

The boy smashes through double doors cleanly without fail. He

has ginger hair and blue eyes. Wearing a black shirt, pyjama
bottoms and black socks. He storms down the stair way. He runs
down two/three flights of stairs before coming out the
stairway at the bottom.

Camera Close up on boy, zooms out to next

Location

2. Int: School Sports Hall

The boy holds a confused facial expression as he sees he is

now in a different location. It is an unknown location to him
and hasn’t seen it before. Looking across the hall he sees a
girl in a chair. The girl has long black hair which is
covering her face. She would be in her young teens, and small,
but not very small. The chair moves towards the boy in a jumpy
way which frightens the boy. The chair stops and the boy is
confused. His hand reaches for the girl but is interrupted by
the girl jumping at him screaming.

Cut to Boy lying on road. Music Kicks in.

3. Ext: Travelling in ambulance

View of looking out of the ambulance window, looking at

passing fields and setting the scene. Certain landmarks are
passed expressing the northen English country side and towns.
Views of ambulance arriving at hospital are shown and then
show the emergency entrance sign.