Toast pops up and on the toast is a title. JAKE walks into shot andgrabs toast, burns self and promptly drops toast. JAKEShitINT: HALLWAY – MORNINGCamera is looking at door, his bag is by door. JAKE walks into shot,picking up bag and walks out door. Camera stays looking at door,after a few seconds JAKE runs back through door- he has forgottenhis file. JAKEShit Jake runs back out through door, slamming it.EXT: STREET – MORNINGCamera is following JAKE from behind as he walks down his drive. JAKE then falls over out of shot suddenly, the non-diegetic musicstops. JAKEShitMain protagonist STEWART is at that point crossing the road andsteps over the crumpled JAKE.STEWARTMorning JakeCamera then follows STEWART as he walks down the road. He is themain protagonist.
Due to changes in the final pitch the screenplay had to be altered to fit in withthe updated narrative.
INT: BEDROOM – MORNINGView of an alarm clock set at 7 o’clock buzzing (alarm isgoing off). A hand comes into shot hitting the alarm off,as this happens non-diegetic, cheery and light musicbegins. Boy gets out of bed and sits on the side lookingtired, in his pyjamas and rubs his face in an effort to
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