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Wow.. you write so professionally. Absolutely awesome, the depth of your words... i love your works. Secular and gospel works all are really impressive and very addictive i must say... keep goin strong. regards, parinita.
Really enjoyed "The War of the Hours" and "Vitium" your poetry is very advanced and I enjoyed it and hope to read more of your work.
I just read through the comments for the first time. tremendous! I must disagree with alicia09, this is tremendous writing-inspiring, thought provoking, imagery evoking genius. However i am going to go back over the poems so i can critique and possibly offer some suggestions on improving a poem or two. Until then, happy writing, and thanks for sharing!
dang it! i just wrote this whole long, very clever scribble and tried submitting it and it got fricken erased! (in charlie brown voice) AHHHHH! oh well, it probably would've offended a lot of people anyway, especially blind people. Actually, come to think of it, there's probably not a lot of blind people browsing the web... or reading articles on scribd for that matter. Dang it! it was so funny an
you should post that comment that got deleted on your wall, or mine!(facebook wall)
PS: I do feel the illustrations lift the quality of the book.
The cover is impressive: Renaissance/Middle Eastern style. "Anger is licenced, bound and controlled". I have been reading non-fiction material by a social worker on just this very theme today, and I will say the first poem gets the message. The second poem communicates a Pandora-like experience. I also enjoyed "Pure" and "War of Hours" (at least the first page of "War"). "Vitum" is active, and "Ro
A wonderful merge of poetry with fantastica images.