Hi Dyson. I think you are full to the brim with thoughts and ideas, and I think you express them very succinctly in your poetry. Some of your poems make me feel sad, some make me feel proud of you..that you hold to a certain 'code'. I think you should definitely keep working at your poetry, and I will be interested to see how they develop and change over time. You definitely have a way with words. Thanks for showing them to me. I will read more over the next couple of weeks. Mrs Taylor