Refuge. New Version.

 
 
 
 
 
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This is the better, edited version to Refuge. A Novel.

Adelaida DeLuna is a shy and beautiful seventeen year old girl with a secret. She just happens to be a half vampire. When her immortal parents decide that it is moving time once again, Adelaida willfully travels with them to Fair Haven, Vermont.

What Adelaida least expects is to run into to her own kind. While on a quick hunting trip, she runs into Berylnn Matheson, a quirky blonde vampire. The two quickly befriend each other, which causes Adelaida to meet the love of her life, Braiden Matheson, Berylnn’s god-like British brother. Without any control, Braiden and Adelaida fall in love with each other almost instantly.

When everything seems all perfect in Adelaida’s life, her world comes crashing down. She is forced to move, leaving the love of her life and her new extended family behind.

When it seems that things cannot get any worse, Braiden suddenly disappears without a trace. Will Adelaida leave her parents and new friends to the save one she loves?

I would love to hear what you think, so once you have read, or started to read, don't be afraid to share your opionons by commenting! Thank you!

© Copyright 2009 Sarah Elizabeth Chambers

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06/18/2009

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joanadarcns

it seams to be good book. dont ever stop writing!

10 / 26 / 2009

amiblackwelder

I love the way words flow over the cover...I'd take out the second well. I wouldn't start with juming into diolgue immediately. I'd set the scene first with narrative or description. you have a humorous voice and I laughed, but I would dial down the dialogue and intersperse it with scences, descriptions, and what they are doing, feeling. My 2 cents.

09 / 11 / 2009

myownreality7xo

i love it! :) braiden is amazing!

08 / 26 / 2009

Paliaya

is this the same exact thing as the other one????

07 / 01 / 2009