AghaAmin

great

nessa81833

plesae write more this is real gd ta let me kno hey u update ta .x.x.

Estiiee

Write Moree Pleasee

chantellecol

u need to write more pls i realyy want to know what happens with dawn

babbi_gurl44

keep goin

chantellecol

write more pls

kriss8585

I know everyone has already said this but, "Please write soon. I love it."

chantellecol

sooooooooooo awsome write more sooooooooon

courtney0407

so good I hope you write more soon

Mrs Kelly Hale

o my gosh this is so good i can't wait 4 u 2 update i can't wait to read more please update soon

Paliaya

cant wait to read more i hope u update soon

i_climb_i_slip_i_fall

wow cant wait to read more! when are you gonna update it?

DecemberVamp

really good so far : ) can't wait to read more !

Doree08

PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE MORE!! this is probably one of the best stories Ive read so far!!!

lilcupcake101

its so so so so good!! it is an amazing wonderful story, the plot is amazing, its brilliat having twilight invloved for treaching a half vamp/ half human, her fallling in love, him not reading her thoughts,, everything is wonderfull, i cant wait for them to go hunting together!!! it is so intense, im anticipating the next update!!! please please please please keep writing!! im soo glad i did =] XXX