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This is a short story that I wrote in hopes of having it published in a contest. I have been unable to get anyone to edit it for me, so here it is in all its incomplete glory. This is a fictional story about a group of friends who go backpacking in the Idaho mountains for a weekend. During their hike they encounter an ancient evil that haunts the woods and caves around Jenny Lake. Please read this and give me any constructive and/or deconstructive criticism you see fit. SIncerely, J. Keene