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M xg| mb n} jgzoqmy` vdgl` mb yc` xoqdi n} joq`|y" M xg| xqmymbh gb `||g} joq n} @bhdm|c ldg|| Nm|| Noqvcm |c` m| q`gdd} |yqmly$ gbi M q`gdd} cgy` iombhcon`xoqe mb n} qoon$ M j``d |o ldgp|yqovcoaml mb my5 N} qoon m| |ngdd$ mycg| n} a`i$ n} lonvpy`q i`|e$ n} a`gpymjpd ldo|`y$ gbi n} bmhcy |ygbixc`q` M vpy n} |lcood aooe| gbi n} gdgqn ldole" N} igi m| boy c`dv gy gdd$c` lon`| yo n} qoon |o nplc yo lc`le ob n` ycgy M joqh`y xcgy M”n iombhgbi M cgz` yo |ygqy ghgmb" M ebox c` n`gb| x`dd| c` m| kp|y yq}mbh yo c`dv cm|y``bgh` igphcy`q ycgy iob”y cgz` g noyc`q jmhpq`$ apy my”| |ymdd aoyc`q n` yc``by`qmbh yo n} qoon |g}mbh —Cob`} b``i gb} c`dv?„ pjj" Gb}xg}| M jmbgdd}jmbm|c n} `||g}$ gbi n} igi m| lgddmbh n`$ c` cgy`| n} vqmzgy` ymn` mb yc`joq`|y$ c` ycmbe| M”dd h`y emdd oq emibgv" Oz`qvqoy`lymz` jood"—Kgb` xc`q` gq` }op?„—M”n c`q` igi$ M”n lonmbh"„ M x`by yo yc` cop|` gbi hoy mb"—C`} igi$ M xg| jmbm|cmbh n} `||g} joq nm|| Noqvcm$ }op ebox ycgyyonoqqox m| yc` i`gidmb` gbi |c` xoby yge` my dgy`"„—M ebox$ apy M q`gdd} cgy` xc`b }op ho yo yc` joq`|y" Lgb }op io }opcon`xoqe gy con`?„—Igi$ io x` cgz` yo cgz` ycm| lobz`q|gymob `z`q} ymn` M lon` jqon yc`joq`|y? ]op ebox M cgy` a``b mbiooq| xc`b iombh n} con`xoqe$ gbi |mbl` M agq`d} ho opy…„—Oe oe$ d`y| kp|y `gy M ngi` }opq noyc`q”| |v`lmgd" Io }op q`n`na`q xc`b|c` p|` yo |mbh xcmd` looembh joq p|?„ N} igi xgby`i yo e``v n} nonn`noqm`| gdmz`$ apy `z`q} ymn` c` imi$ M lopdi j``d g |cgqv vgmb mb n} c`gqyxcmd` g jdg|c agle oj g lgq cmyymbh opq| ob n} noyc`q |mi`" \c` xg| iqmzmbhn` yo vmgbo d`||ob" \c` im` mb|ygbyd} xcmd` n`$ |mbl` M xg| ob yc` agle oj yc` lgq kp|y do|y n} lob|lm`bl` gbi xoe` pv ob yc` co|vmygd ob` x``e dgy`q" Mxg| 8 }`gq| odi" Xmyc g y`gq mb n} `}` M |gmi" —Xcmy` qml` gbi n`gy dg|ghbg"„—]op ebox igi M iob”y dme` ygdembh gaopy n} noyc`q" ]op ebox xco M h`y gjdg|c agle oj cox M emdd c`q"„—Kgb` Ngim|ob' Box }op ebox a`yy`q ycgb |g}mbh |on` |ypvmi |ypjj dme`ycgy"„ M lopdi |`` imjj`q`by `svq`||mob| mb n} jgyc`q| jgl`$ gbh`q gdobh xmyc|gib`||"—Igi mj M xopdib”y g|e c`q yo iqmz` n` c`q |`dj yo vmgbo d`||ob" M |copdi oj xgde n} |`dj mb|y`gi yc` jmz` adole|$ |c` xopdi |ymdd a` gdmz`" Bo$ M cgi yolq} gbi g|e c`q yo iqmz` n`$ a`lgp|` M xg| x`gqmbh n} b`x iq`|| gbi Mimib”y xgby my yo h`y my imqy}" Box y`dd n` M”n boy gb g||g||mb… ”” A`joq` c`lopdi |ygqy }`ddmbh gy n` gbhqmd} M |yooi pv"7
 
—]op ebox xcgy? M”n boy cpbhq}"„—Kgb` Ngim|ob"„ Apy M mhboq` cmn$ M x`by yo n} qoon gbi |dgn yc` iooq  a`cmbi n`"Xcmd` mb n} qoon M ycqox n} |`dj mb yc` a`i gbi |ygqy`i lq}mbh n} |`dj yo|d``v"Yc` |pb xoe` n` pv$ apy M |ymdd q`n`na`q`i dg|y bmhcy jmhcy xmyc n}igi" \o$ M vpy yc` |c``y mb n} jgl` gbi yq} yo ho agle yo |d``v$ boy xgbymbh yoho yo |lcood yoig}" M `z`b joqhoy gaopy yc` `||g} ycgy cgi yo a` ypqb`i mbyoig} oq b`z`q" Jmjy``b nmbpy`| dgy`q yc` gdgqn ob n} bmhcy |ygbi x`by ojj gbi M cmy my obl` |o$ my |cpy”| pv gbi x`by agle yo |d``v" Jmz` nmbpy`| dgy`q n} igi lgn` Mb gbi |bgylc yc` |c``y| ojj"—Xge` pv'„ N} igi }`dd gy n`"—BO'„ M }`dd agle"—Kgb` Iob”y nge` n` ld`gb }op n} |`dj"„ C` ycq`gy`b`i n`"—Igi }op lgb io xcgy`z`q }op xgby$ M xoby ho yo |lcood yoig}"„—\o yc` `||g} }opq a``b xoqembh joq < ig}| box$ }opq hombh yo ycqox my mbyc` yqg|c?„N} igi eb`x n} x`ge |voy" C` eb`x M xg| |plc g b`qi" —Oe$ igi$ M”dd h`ypv gbi h`y q`gi}" Kp|y hmz` n` y`b nmbpy`| oe?„—Ycgy”| n} hmqd"„ Gbi c` x`by yo yc` emylc`b"M hoy mb yc` |cox`q$ yc`b M aqp|c n} aqpb`yy` cgmq$ gbi |ygqy`i yo dooe gy n}jgl` joq g nmbpy`" M xg| g boqngd y``bgh` hmqd$ yc` obd} ycmbh imjj`q`by gaopyn` m| ycgy M xg| boy qmlc boq vooq" M xg| boy g lc``qd`gi`q boq g h``e" Oe Mimi dme` |lcood g doy gbi M xg| g |yqgmy G |ypi`by apy M iq`|| boqngd |o bo aoi} b`x M xg| g b`qi kp|y n} jqm`bi|" M imib”y xgby yo |v`bi nplc ymn`iq`||mbh n} |`dj yoig}$ |o M vpy ob n} jgzoqmy` |x`gy |pmy" Gbi x`by yo yc`emylc`b xc`q` n} igi cgi ob` vdgy` oj aq`gejg|y joq n` gbi ob` joq cmn"—Igi$ cpn$ M”n boy cpbhq} lgb M kp|y ho yo |lcood?„—Gaopy }`|y`qig}" M”n |…„—Iob”y vd`g|`„—Oe$ xmdd }op a` c`q` gjy`q |lcood oq }op hoy oyc`q vdgb|?„ C` dooe gy n`xmyc cov`jpd `}`|" Covmbh M xopdi boy ho yo yc` joq`|y" BO ngyy`q coxngb} ymn`| M y`dd cmn yo iqov my c` |ymdd cov`"—Bo igi$ M a`` c`q` gjy`q |lcood"„ Xc} }op g|e?—X`dd$ M xg| covmbh ycgy }op iob”y ho yo yc` joq`|y gbi mbzmy` }opq jqm`bi| yolon` yo cgz` imbb`q xmyc p|"„—Xc}?„ M g|e qgm|mbh n} aqox|" N} jqm`bi| b`z`q b``i`i gb mbzmygymob joq imbb`q yc`} kp|y lgn` xc`b yc`} xgby`i yo" \o ycgy xg| g dmyyd` |p|vmlmop|"—M doz` xc`b yc`} lon` oz`q"„ C` |nmd` xmyc ycgy |p|vmlmop| jgl` ghgmb"1—Oe$ M”dd yq} apy M iob”y ycmbe yc`}”dd lon`"„ Gb}ycmbh yo h`y n` opy oj yc`
 
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Rashell_Quinn

i love it...me encanta:)

reply08 / 07 / 2010
belkisaris

I'm fixing it and the new copy won't have the draft...

reply08 / 27 / 2009
Esther ;)

Yuu Made Lots Of Spelling Mistakes An Kept Repeating Them Like Yuu Spelt 'Strait' Instead Of Straight.. Yuu Should Really Work On That But The Story Was Gurdd But Got Confusing At Times

reply08 / 21 / 2009
belkisaris

I know, my first language is Spanish :( I try to get it as good as i can :)

08 / 21 / 2009
belkisaris

Yeah, sorry my writing is kind of bad, i try to get it as good as i could :(

reply07 / 17 / 2009
alicat0824

Also you need to space the chapters better because they need a more significant event, or a prelude to stop at. Message me if you need any help and read the part of _The Runaway Wolf_ that I have out and comment. Thanks Ali

reply07 / 15 / 2009
alicat0824

You need to spell check and edit so it all makes sense. But i like it so far

reply07 / 15 / 2009
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