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Dragonballs: RevolutionbyDPJG
1 (1) – SOMEWHERE IN THE MOUNTAINS, GOHAN'S RESIDENCE. AFTERNOON.Gohan and Goku is balancing on two parallell lines going into each of their own setof poles. It's a regular clothesline. The lines themselves are very thin, almostunnoticeable, unlike the wires attached to the back of both actors. The sun isdipping and a breeze is tousling through the hair of Goku. Gohan seems to beunaffected by the wind, mysteriously.GOHANGoku. Believe in who you are and who you are will believe in you.Goku is staring at Gohan with deep appreciation, seemingly grabbing the words bytheir syllabic neck and cramming them into the ABC of his heart. The wind is nolonger tousling through Goku's overly gelled mane. Gohan jumps forward with bothlegs airborne at the same time and gently descends onto the lines again. Goku isunsurprised by this maneuver.TEXT ENTERING SCREENRemember, an activity that have been practiced every day for a number of years,is rendered unimpressive to those involved.GOHANFirst one to be thrown into a nearby shed loses. Prepare, my son!Goku finds it appropriate to lunge at Gohan with a punch. Gohan grabs Goku's armand twists it so that Goku spins in the air, only to safely land onto the lines again.Goku withdraws his hand and tips himself over on purpose.GOKUWhoa, whoa, whoa (theatrical)He falls backward and is now upside down, hanging from the two parallell lineswith his feet. Gohan looks down at him, grinning with the teeth he doesn't have.Beneath the clothesline is a Bonzai tree, slightly bigger than most Bonzai treesshould be. Goku grabs the Bonzai to pull himself down, creating tension in the line.Now that the line is a «V», he lets go and flings himself towards the sky, somehowmixing in a couple of barrel rolls.GOKU
 
Bonzai! (Yelling, emitting «pun intended»)Goku comes down at Gohan from the air with both arms pointed straight forward(at Gohan), but Gohan grabs Goku's arms and starts spinning the boy around hisneck like a hoola hoop. After doing this for approximately 5 seconds, he kicksGoku into a nearby shed littered with roses.Gohan is helping Goku up.GOHANYou still need practice. Know what made me beat you yet again?GOKUI can't fight what I can't see?GOHANExactly. You were not slightly aware of what I was going to do. My ability to dowhat you are least expecting, it is called Ki. We all have it in our hearts. Somemore than others.GOKUYeah, but... Ki is so hard to master. I always end up making a fool of myself...GOHANStop talking nonsense! Focus, my son. It is all about focus. You have too much ofit. Let go and you will truly be spontaneous. Let your body act before your mind.Goku nods silently, shifting his eyes to the dipping sun. He picks up a rose lyingnext to him, sniffing it. Gohan looks at him with uncertainty.SOME MINUTES HAVE PASSED. CUT TO:1 (2)- INSIDE GOHAN'S GREENHOUSE, STILL AFTERNOON, STILL SOMEWHEREIN THE MOUNTAINS.(Dialogue)GOHANHey Goku. Take this. You didn't think I would forget, did ya? (old man's laugh)GOKU(Gently opens the piece of cloth. Marvels at the two shiny balls for a couple ofseconds, wondering what the heck it is)GOHANThey'll help you find your inner Ki, Goku. Among other things which I will explainin due time.
 
GOKUThanks, grandpa. With these, I'm gonna beat you once and for all (referring toearlier training session)GOHANHar har, beat up an old man, that would be something to tell your friends, wouldn'tit? (winks slyly at the camera, because he knows Goku has no friends)GOKUTo whom would I tell anyway? I have no friends. People at school think I'm a totalfreak.GOHANGoku, I have to admit to you, sometimes I too just want to beat your Goddamnedface and throw your carcass to the crocodiles, but listen... in addition to being atotal loser, you have this thing called a destiny. It will make YOU the hero. And it'smy task to have you fulfill it. These balls I just gave you, they're a part of it.GOKUBut I don't wanna feel different. Sometimes it's like I almost explode. When themean boys at school say bad things and the girls refuse to have sex with me... Ijust want to tear them apart, you know. Smash their faces into the concrete. Pulltheir hair. I really wanna...Goku pauses, clinching his fists (one ball in each), swallowing. Gohan looks at himwith slight skepticism.GOHANI didn't teach you to fight so that you could beat up boys and have intercourse withfemale classmates, Goku. That's what I will fit into the curriculum of my next pupil.What you must do, is--Goku interrupts.GOKUBut why then, did you teach me martial arts?!GOHANHumph... okay then, I guess it is time. What you have there, my son (Gohan pointsat the balls) is a set of shiny balls, presumably made out of glass.Goku waits for the rest of Gohan's big revealing. Half a minute passes by withoutnone of them saying much. 40 seconds. 50 seconds. 1 minute.GOKUErr, grandpa, that was kind of obvious just by looking at them.GOHAN
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Emblum Shadowstorm

ok not being an ass to you but Dragonball Evolution DESTROYED THE FAME OF ONE OF THE BEST ANIME'S IN HISTORY!!! ok i am done but your work is awesome!!!

reply01 / 03 / 2010
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01 / 03 / 2010
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