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“WE RETURN TO DUST”Written byTHUNDERSTORMDisclaimer:Episode EightPurely Fan Fiction.JULY 5, 2009No infringements intended.
 
"WE RETURN TO DUST"
ACT ONE:
WE OPEN HIGH UP, FROM THE TOP OF THE TREES, DAYTIME. AFTER AMOMENT, WE SWOOP DOWN, WE END UP FIXED ON A STRUGGLING SAYID,ON HIS KNEES, HOLDING HIS BLEEDING GUT. IT’S EVIDENT, WE AREFLASHBACKING BEFORE ‘THE INCIDENT’. HE SITS MOTIONLESSSTARING, A CUT REVEALS THE ‘STRANGE MAN’ WE HAVE ONLY SEEN IN“HOW THIS ENDS”. HE STANDS SILENT, WITH A STOIC EXPRESSION.HE HAS HIS HAND EXTENDED OUT TO SAYID. BACK ON SAYID, WHO ISREALLY STRUGGLING, GETTING EMOTIONAL. HE SPEAKS QUIETLY.
SAYID:
(DISTRAUGHT) THE PAIN...(LOOKS AT THE STRANGE MAN)I’LL LIVE TO REGRET THIS.
STRANGE MAN:
(CALM) BUT YOU
WILL
LIVE.SAYID BEGINS TO SOB AND STICKS HIS HAND OUT, GRABBING THESTRANGE MAN’S HAND. A SHOT OF THE STRANGE MAN SMILING. THENHE JUST DISAPPEARS. SAYID APPEARS COMPLETELY SHOCKED, INTERRIBLE SHAPE. HE LOOKS DOWN AND GRABS HIS STOMACH. HE’S OUTOF BREATH, LIFTING UP HIS SHIRT HIS WOUNDS ARE DISAPPEARING.PANICKING, UNABLE TO BREATHE, HE FALLS OVER, HE THEN SEES APAIR OF LEGS STANDING IN FRONT OF HIM. HE LOOKS UP, STILLCHOKING, WHEN A PURPLE FLASH OF LIGHT PLUMES THE SCREEN. WEARE NOW STARING AT YOUNG BEN LINUS. HE’S BENT OVER SAYID, WHOIS NOW EXHALING EXTREMELY HARD, GASPING FOR NEEDED BREATH.YOUNG BEN LEANS CLOSER TO SPEAK TO HIM.
YOUNG BEN:
IT’S TIME FOR YOU TO SEE HOW THIS ENDS.SAYID IS BREATHING EASIER BUT IS SHOCKED BEYOND BELIEF ATSEEING HIM. A CUT BACK TO A SMILING YOUNG BEN, AND THE SCREENJUST FLASHES WHITE. IT’S ‘THE INCIDENT’. SAYID WAKES UP INTHE GRASS. HE APPEARS TO GO FROM CONFUSED AND LOST, TOCOLLECTED AND DETERMINED IN THE SNAP OF A FINGER. HE STANDSUP AND BEGINS WALKING, EXITING THE SCREEN. OMINOUS MUSICPLAYS THROUGHOUT AS THE SCENE ENDS.WE PICK UP WITH BRAM, WALKING SOMEWHERE AWHILE AFTER EXITINGTHE TEMPEST STATION, HE WALKS A FEW MORE PACES AND STOPS. HELOOKS DOWN. IT’S A SMOKEY HOLE, OR A CEREBUS VENT, IF YOUPREFER. HE PULLS OUT HIS GUN AND STARTS FIRING IN THE HOLE.ONE, TWO, THREE SHOTS. HE STOPS AND WAITS. AFTER A BEAT ORTWO, ‘THE SOUND’ IS HEARD. BRAM BACKS UP SEVERAL PACES ANDSTOPS. HE’S STARING DOWN AT THE HOLE. WHEN THE SMOKE MONSTERCOMES RACING THROUGH LIKE A FREIGHT TRAIN, DISTURBING ALLTHAT IS AROUND HIM. IT INSTANTLY SWOOPS DOWN TO SCAN BRAM.
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