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Forever and a day (Part 1)

 
 
 
 
 
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My story is sort of on the rocs but i hope to have good feedback from it. Even if i dont i will take it into consideration and try to revise itto th audiences liking. Mine too. I hope to get lots of ratings and some discoverability. Remember! This isonly part 1 and told in Luna and Dimetri's point of veiw. Thanks so much.

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07/08/2009

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*blackheart*

amazing!!!! NEXt part plzzzzzzz before i suffer withdrawel symptoms:)))))))

10/29/2009
SamanthaBurke1

SamanthaBurke1

Next part PLEASE!

09/23/2009
SamanthaBurke1

SamanthaBurke1

That is - I can't put a word to except well, ( excuse my plainlyness) AWSOME!

09/22/2009
ssu2929

ssu2929

its awesome!!!! cant wait to read the next part!!!!!!!!!

09/10/2009
the vamp child

the vamp child

Ok, umm thank u 4 the coments and all. Im so glad you gus liked it. I have had a litte problem with my computer and it deleted the entire second part. i was so pissed cuz i had over 300 page written. anyway, i will be posting a new part 2 in about a month. LOVES YOU ALL!!!

09/01/2009
midnightrises

midnightrises

i luv it xD more more!

08/15/2009
bubbly_girl123

bubbly_girl123

Erm, ok. So i didn't finish reading it because i seriosuly could not get past the brother and sister thing. Talk about ew. I get that he's not her real brother and all, but they grew up as brother and sister, right? I don;t mean to be rude, your writing is really good! but the story wasnt so hot. at least up until what i read. I guess maybe i might not have all the facts about the story so excuse me if i'm wrong, but they're brother and sister! I found it kind of disturbing, but judging from the comments i guess it gets super good or something. This is only the opinion of one among many so i hope you don't take offense.

08/15/2009
i_climb_i_slip_i_fall

i_climb_i_slip_i_fall

OMG i luv this it is really good u so need 2 upload the next part asap! i seriously cant w8 2 read it!

07/26/2009
lilimay15

lilimay15

omgosh!!!! it's really so beautiful... can u write more please please please... i'm so waiting for an update.. :)

07/21/2009
polar guide

polar guide

omg please write more please please please i am totaly waiting for an update.

07/21/2009
savannah.dawn1598

savannah.dawn1598

this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please write more!!!!!!

07/16/2009
tabrirwo

tabrirwo

that is so good u have to write more soon .......oooohhhh it's interesting i realy wonder what's going to happen next?who she will chose and when her powers are going to be used?

07/15/2009
Paliaya

Paliaya

plz write more i wonder what happens next cant wait to read more!!!!

07/13/2009