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Between Two Loves

 Luna“Beep! Beep! Beep!” My alarm clock sang at 6:30 that morning on the last day at“The Torture Chamber” adults call Andover High School. There I am the most populargirl and the bitchiest to everyone. I always looked hot, got the best grades andhad awesome parties. I was always the most exclusive and everyone loved me butsome didn’t like me too much. Most people wondered why I was as popular as I was.I was rich, pretty and smart, obviously the components for popularity. Though Inever had a real boyfriend, I crushed on a guy named Jesse Fellini. His black hairand midnight blue eyes always left me breathless. He was so hot but he wasn’tinterested in me. Which I thought was weird because every guy wanted me. I didn’twant them though, I wanted Jesse. Anyway, today was the last day of school andevery last student had to go or that meant detention for next year. I wanted to bethe best that I could be and I didn’t want to look like a slacker, ditcher or atruant student. My eyes opened as I slapped down the snooze button. The light beamed throughthe main window in my room. I instinctively put my hand up over my face to shieldme from the light. I groaned as I pulled the sheet over my head. As I did mybrother, Dimetri walked in and pulled the blanket off of me.“Come on Luna. Time for school.” he said in a cheerful voice.He was always happy to do everything although he was always a little strangein our family. I was considered normal. He looked exactly like me but better. Hishair was messy but it looked good like it was a style. His eyes were grayer thanmine and he was smarter. I was in tenth while he was skipped up to twelfth. Ialways envied him for his smarts and looks. His attitude was different and Ididn’t want that.“If you don’t leave, I will sock you in face.” I threatened.“Mom will be mad if you miss school and she‘ll blame me for not making you go.”“Mom’s in Spain, stupid.”Our parents had taken a second honeymoon in Spain and we stayed inCalifornia. Since we were fifteen she and dad had decided to let us stay for twomonths by ourselves.“Whatever. Just get up or we’ll get in trouble.” He said.Dimetri always seemed to care a lot about my problems and my feelings. Oncewhen we were thirteen, in middle school, a guy named Scott Withers tried to grabmy boob in Gym class and Dimetri literally came out of nowhere and broke three ofhis fingers. Two days after that happened, he and his high school friends beat thecrap out of him and made him apologize to me. I used to get flowers in my lockersaying “Im sorry.”. I always did wonder about how he knew but I was too popularand self-centered to care. I don’t think that I even thanked him.“Leave me alone.” I grumbled as I pulled the sheet over my face again. I heard himwalk away so I assumed he left. He has so quiet that I barely heard him approachme. Dimetri ran up and pored something on me. I tore the Egyptian cotton sheet off
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    Sofizzle

    When will part 2 be published? :o

    reply11 / 27 / 2009
    *blackheart*

    amazing!!!! NEXt part plzzzzzzz before i suffer withdrawel symptoms:)))))))

    reply10 / 29 / 2009
    SamanthaBurke1

    That is - I can't put a word to except well, ( excuse my plainlyness) AWSOME!

    reply09 / 22 / 2009
    ssu2929

    its awesome!!!! cant wait to read the next part!!!!!!!!!

    reply09 / 10 / 2009
    the vamp child

    Ok, umm thank u 4 the coments and all. Im so glad you gus liked it. I have had a litte problem with my computer and it deleted the entire second part. i was so pissed cuz i had over 300 page written. anyway, i will be posting a new part 2 in about a month. LOVES YOU ALL!!!

    reply09 / 01 / 2009
    ssu2929

    please post it i want to kno what happens :(

    09 / 11 / 2010
    Twilightnumber1fan

    WHEN R U GOING TO POST?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?

    04 / 13 / 2010
    OMEedwardismine

    awwwww somtimes i really hate computers..... but im sure part two will be amaizing .......=)

    03 / 06 / 2010
    jennifer-dolby-6591

    stupid computers.... cant wait for part two though!

    02 / 23 / 2010
    Twilightnumber1fan

    Have you put it up yet?

    02 / 14 / 2010
    midnightrises

    i luv it xD more more!

    reply08 / 15 / 2009
    bubbly_girl123

    Erm, ok. So i didn't finish reading it because i seriosuly could not get past the brother and sister thing. Talk about ew. I get that he's not her real brother and all, but they grew up as brother and sister, right? I don;t mean to be rude, your writing is really good! but the story wasnt so hot. at least up until what i read. I guess maybe i might not have all the facts about the story so excuse me if i'm wrong, but they're brother and sister! I found it kind of disturbing, but judging from the comments i guess it gets super good or something. This is only the opinion of one among many so i hope you don't take offense.

    reply08 / 15 / 2009
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