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MY CRITICAL REVIEW: Alchemy of the Pineal Gland by James Portocarrero

MY CRITICAL REVIEW: Alchemy of the Pineal Gland by James Portocarrero



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MY CRITICAL REVIEW: Alchemy of the Pineal Gland by James Portocarrero

Vastly more informative than the book.
MY CRITICAL REVIEW: Alchemy of the Pineal Gland by James Portocarrero

Vastly more informative than the book.

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Published by: Zero One on Aug 13, 2009
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Critical Review
Alchemy of the Pineal Glandby James Portocarrero(preview version)
 NOTE: I wouldn’t normally care to write something like this but I couldn’t resist after Tamid’s respectfulresponse to my generous rating.Tamid’s book can be found at http://www.scribd.com/doc/17977107/Alchemy-of-the-Pineal-Gland-- If you feel the need to let me know where I went wrong, or if my criticism wasn’t vastly more informative thanhis book was about the pineal gland, please let me know… I do love a good debate and I can admit when Iam either ignorant, wrong, or crass.Tamid,Actually I read all of the pages you have available for preview.I think that it needs some serious editing before it's ready to be purchased. This isn't the remark of an"asshole" this is the corrective criticism of an academic who just wants to see you do better for yourself.If you can tune this up a little bit, I think that you would have a pretty good buy here.Your introduction alone produces far too many "strange" errors. The aim of the book should be gearedtoward your audience not toward yourself. The reader doesn't care if you want to put YOUR conversationsdown in words, the reader wants something that engages him on his level. Something like the followingmight be more appropriate: The aim of this book is to produce for the reader a clear and personalunderstanding of the Pineal Gland through the experiences of myself and countless others who I havediscussed this topic with ad nauseum.

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James Portocarrero added this note
By the way I just uploaded a full version of the text where you can read 35% and see that whoever wrote this nasty review is completely wrong. - https://Alchemy of the Pineal Gland
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This crazy chick didn't even READ my book.. I didn't even post except but a few pages from it for a preview and she gets all worked up and into a fit over it over NOTHING! She read some of the pages that contained sources and information and then worked up into this huge rant over my book that she hasn't even read!! Jealous old crazy woman! Why don't you write your own book!
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I am only posting this to let everyone know the kind of scam artist that "Tamid" is. He keeps stupid and unintelligent people around him, all the while milking them for money and using them to inflate his ego. If you don't inflate his ego, he despises you. He is such a sicko. He is the definition of a close minded buffoon.He should not be allowed to continue to scam intellectually impaired people.
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