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What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its fun and up-beat
What do you like about the video? Close-ups Font of the text at the beginning of the video Fading and transitions between shots Bubbles and their effect Lighting
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She is attractive and wears suitable clothing in order to seem like a nice artist who is down to earth
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I like it because its happy and the sun makes it feel like summer
What do you like about the video? The sun and the lighting
What do you dislike? The song isnt really my type of music I dont like the mirror effect at around 1:35
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? Shes fun and looks like she is enjoying herself in the video
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Change the mirror bit to something more fitting, maybe more nature shots
What are your initial thoughts on the video? It seems quite girly and aimed at women, but still I like it because its nice to watch
What do you like about the video? The shots of the sun and nature as they are bright and colourful Clear shots, defined camera The bubbles
What do you dislike? The kaleidoscope section, it just seems a bit weird
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She seems nice and like a normal teenager
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its nice and fun to watch, lots of visually exciting things going on in it
What do you like about the video? The camera angles as theyre varied and nicely framed I like the amount of costumes used as it keeps it exciting Song and video collaborate well
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? Shes a nice girl who looks like a successful artist in a professional music video
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Make sure the lip syncing is perfect, as some were a tiny bit out of sync
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its nice and contains lots of natural shots that are pretty and nice to look at
What do you like about the video? The outfits that the singer wears The nature shots
What do you dislike? On the first draft I didnt like the indoor shots because they didnt fit the video
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? Loves singing and is into fashion, attractive and suits the video
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Youve changed the indoor shots to outdoor ones which is good but some of the locations look too similar
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I think its really good
What do you like about the video? The different mirror and kaleidoscope effects The music and video go well together The styling of the singer
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She seems grown up and confident
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Maybe her singing when she is in the car as the background vocals arent noticeable enough
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I like the mirrored effect that you have used in the video and I also like the kaleidoscope effect that you have used too I think it adds a funky effect to the video and makes it stand out from all the other music videos that are out their.
What do you like about the video? I like the mirrored effect and the kaleidoscope effect.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She is very pretty and suits the role well.
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I think its really good and I like the nature in the video.
What do you like about the video? The nature, the bubbles and bubble effects. Also I like the car shots.
What do you dislike? I dislike two of the outfits that are used because they seem winter-like.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? I think shes nice but sometimes too serious.
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Clothing could be more summer-like and Rosa-Leigh could smile more.
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I really like the artist and style of the video.
What do you like about the video? I like the intro and outro of Rosa-Leighs Face.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She looks serene and fits in with the natural surroundings
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Maybe change the bubbles for nature shots
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I love the naturalistic shots.
What do you like about the video? How bright most of the shots are also the framing of the shots.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She suits the role well and fits the genre well too.
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its fun to watch
What do you like about the video? The car shots are good
What do you dislike? The ending doesnt seem right because it fades to white instead of the normal black
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She wears appropriate clothes and looks good in the video
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Maybe change the ending so it fades out on her face or fades to black
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I like it and it suits the genre perfectly
What do you like about the video? I see that your target audience is my age group and I think your video is appealing and good to watch, so I think youve aimed it at the right people I like the nature included The car shots The bubbles The kaleidoscope shots
What do you dislike? I dont really like some of her outfits but thats because Im not really into fashion
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She looks and seems like a nice artist and normal woman
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? You could change her outfits but its not necessary
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its sweet and the artist looks nicely styled
What do you like about the video? I like the use of nature I like the car shots I think the mirror effect and the bubbles work really well
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She fits with the genre in the video and is a good choice for this type of video
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its not really my thing but the skill and effort that went into this is easy to see in the video
What do you like about the video? I like the styling of the artist The nature works well
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She looks like a nice artist and has a great persona
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Maybe add more shots of the artist not singing
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its fun to watch and a good music video
What do you like about the video? The car shots are really good The panning of the nature shots is also good The styling and genre of the artist works well in this video
What do you dislike? What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She looks down to earth because of her surroundings Nice role model because of what she looks like and the type of video this is
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its happy and makes me feel in a good mood
What do you like about the video? Its cleverly done Not too over the top
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She suits the video and looks good in it
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its simple but effective
What do you like about the video? Its natural and not a forced performance It highlights the song
What do you dislike? Some shots are too long such as the one with the red flower
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She looks relaxed and fun
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Faster editing and more shots included
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I think it was really good and fun to watch
What do you like about the video? I liked the special effects such as the mirror and bubbles
What do you dislike? I dont like the song but I still think the video is really good
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She is really pretty and suits the video really well
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I like the elements of sun and the lighting of the shots
What do you like about the video? The sun I like the editing and the mirror shots
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She looks like a chilled artist
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Add more shorter shots
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I think its good
What do you like about the video? The various types of shots The continuity of the style
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She seems like a nice artist
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I think its very light and calming
What do you like about the video? I like how refreshing it is to see something natural I like how youve not tried to make it too professional, its homemade
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? I thought she was very organic Shes natural and not false Her shyness is endearing
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Maybe less outfit changes Focus on Rosa-Leighs lip syncing more
What are your initial thoughts on the video? Its calming and nice to watch
What do you like about the video? I like that its natural I feel comfortable watching it
What do you dislike? The mirror shots The car shots where the hair goes in her face
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? I think she is an inspiring to have used Influences natural beauty
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Not use as many outfits
What are your initial thoughts on the video? The music matches the shots in the video. And the style of the artist matches the genre.
What do you like about the video? I like how the artist is styled and when shes dancing around with the bubbles and with the mirror shot.
What do you dislike? I dislike the fence in the background of first shot in the first draft.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She suits the genre well.
Can you suggest any improvements for the video? Re-shoot the fence shots in the first draft.
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I like the scenery in the video and its very relaxed.
What do you like about the video? I like the naturalistic shots and the genre.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She suits the naturalistic shots and effects and the summer clothes match the video well.
What are your initial thoughts on the video? I really like the genre and style of the artist.
What do you like about the video? The artists style and the different variety of shots used.
What is your opinion on Rosa-Leigh from this video? She suits the genre well and the styling of her clothes is well presented in the video. I also like how the necklace is in every shot with her no matter the change of clothes.