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 Natalia Pratiwinatnat-instyle.blogspot.com 
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 ©2009, Natalia Pratiwi natnat.instyle@ymail.com 
 
 
 
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“MY PRIVATE NOTE” ACT ONE
FADE IN:INT. STAGE HALL, LAKEVILLE SOUTH HIGH SCHOOL – DAYA boy and a girl, bringing their own sheet of paper, standing on aStage.NATALIE MCLANE, a 15 year old girl, beautiful dark long hair girl with aworried expression, standing face to face with her partner.KRIS WOOD, a 16 year old boy, charming boy with a spirited expression,go deep down into his character toward hers.NATALIE MCLANE“Why?! In the name of Mother of Earth – Whycan’t you rescue the Brother of Yours?!”KRIS WOOD“For I have chosen, My Love! Either him staybeing the eternity prisoner of King Sayeed or Ihave to leave you being the slavery wife ofthat evil King!”NAT“So you help me instead of your brother ofblood?!”KRIS“I’m helping you for that I know you shall notbe persisted serving all weirdest will fromthat Evil Man!”NAT“I will! I’m just serving him! Your Brotherwill be tortured for live!”KRIS“Well I won’t see you serving him!”NAT“Why?!”KRIS“Because I Love You!”NAT(gasping! – a beat)“…but I love your brother.”KRIS“I know… but you will love me.”Kris walks closer to her right away, holding both of her cheeks andleaning down - ready to kiss her.
 
 
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NAT
Ho-howkay 
!..(avoiding immediately)DIRECTOR
CUT!
Kris seems disappointed about not kissing her, and the director, onceagain, put off his ‘lazy-mad’ expression toward Natalie.DIRECTORWhat was that?NATW’well, I assumed that we have to save the‘kissing part’ away for a real stage, so thatwe really can embrace it more later on. Youknow?..(unwilling smile)DIRECTOR(disbelief)Well I assumed that your whole speech about‘embrace thing’ is
bull-ish
. There’s somethinggoin’ on between you two and you brought it inhere – And thank’s to you, we have to do it allover again – wasting another time.(a beat)And everyone get back on a stage, please!!The casts walk up the stage with lazy behavior.DIRECTORAnd Kris, you kiss her up real nice! Okay?!KRISI will, Sir.Nat just takes her breath out.DIRECTORAlright, 1… 2… …ACTION!--SFX:
KRIIING!!...
School bell RINGS.NAT(happy shock)
Aaw!
Time’s up! Bummer…(Fake disappointed)A slightly disappointed look comes at Kris. While the director seemsreally fed up with all of the interruption.DIRECTOR
Hoow…
kay… well Don’t forget tomorrow same place– same time! And Nobody bringing their scripton a stage! MUST – KNOW – EVERY SINGLE WORD!..Everyone starts preparing to leave.
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