SarahAnnWayne

unforgettable!

AmySongrass

where did you get the inspiration to write this! its good! love it.

gr82b12share

Wow! This can go far. So vivid. I liked the haystack castle its a tender gesture.

gogogirlz

Hoot - Yeah! you win the prize! we like it. where are these guys at our college? another story perhaps?

BVSummers

Sweet. I do like Mozart! Write on!

zinger39472

Not a bad story for a geek. Thank you for serving in the Navy. Marla's friend. Oh yeah, can you add more to the story? Thanks.

LegalSectryINC

I've been to West Branch. What hosptial are you referring? This is a great short story anyway.

Lisa B Wright

Marla and I like the story. We think your 'past relationship' was a girl name Josie. We read it in the street name directions. Keep up the work!

Marla P McNight

Thanks for the good read. Very sweet - you single? Write another...please...

ItsADogsWorld09

Stumbled on this short story a read it. Powerful content and passion. Love it!

Susan Abyia

A good read and sweet. How did you come to write this?

Sweet Pea78

Nice! This is great start and leaves a lot to the imagination. Keep up the good work.

StraightJacket3983

We like the story because it is us in love. Isabella and Jonathan 4 ever!

Terri L Phillips

Unforgettable story! You were truly inspired by the past relationship? What an inspiration! When is the next chapter or story ready? Keep writing!!!

Battle Doctor

You go brother! Very nice and a sweet story. You submariners are a curious bunch. Wish more guys had this passion. Thanks for serving!