qwertyuiop22

hmm... quite interesting. this seems like its going to envelop into a great story line. cant wait for more;]

ilytwilight123

cool story, read my story Sunset at Dusk, its a rough Draft! So pardon my mistakes, and grammer but plz tell me if the plot is good, i will publish the Final Copy very soon so be on the look out for that! Sunset at Dusk is a sequel to Breaking Dawn about 4-5 years later from Renesmee's point of view. Enjoy!

blue rose 411

pls pls write more

Esther ;)

What Happens Write More ..It Soo Good

llreyna27

Great!...i'm in suspense...can't wait to read what happens next!

Resa97

like the twist of the story...very creative,original...continue writing...don't keep us in suspense,plz...

Leeza the Ice Vampire

I'll be uploading more of the story today. Ironically enough, I'm writing it right now. There are still more events destined to happen. I'm putting myself into the character's shoes and acting how I think they would act. Thank you to all who commented because us writer's single most driving motivation is hearing feedback from their readers. I will do my best to update this story as soon as I write each chapter. Thank you readers! - Leeza the Ice Vampire

Leeza the Ice Vampire

I'll be uploading more of the story today. Ironically enough, I'm writing it right now. There is still more events that are destined to happen. I'm putting myself into the character's shoes and acting how I think they would act. Thank you to all who commented because us writer's single most driving motivation is hearing feedback from their readers. I will do my best to update this story as soon as I write each chapter. Thank you readers! - Leeza the Ice Vampire

Resa97

plz continue writing this story...it's very interesting...when r u going 2 upload the rest of the story? can't wait...

edwardcrazy9713

very nice :)

Leeza the Ice Vampire

Thank you! Will upload another chapter today. :)

luv_fo_ev _twilight

i am so glad i am the first to comment. i luv this story, please continue writing.