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I WON"T BE WRITING MORE UNTIL I GET MORE COMMENTS OR SUBSCRIPTIONS!!!
After Jacob starts ignoring Bella and the encounter with Laurent and the wolves in Edward's meadow, Bella is convinced Victoria is coming for her.
And with no one to go to about her fears. Bella tries to be around people as much as possible. But one day when she gets home, she finds the person she fears most waiting for her.
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OHMYNIKKI is right, u should keep writing no matter what!! I think this is awesome =] Please update soon.
I think that you've got a great beginning to this alternate ending of New Moon. Be careful of some of your grammar though (e.g.: using you're - which is basically saying you are - instead of your and vice versa) I'm really intrigued to see what happens next...your ending is great with that simple statement :). Keep writing and remember: even if people don't comment or subscribe just yet doesn't mean you should quit if it is something that you enjoy! Good luck! =D
It's good. Keep writing :)
LittleDhampir:
Thanks. I'm not sure if i should keep writing until it gets more reads though. I'll wait a bit.