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CLASSIFYING ESSAY REVIEW
TYPE :CLASSIFYING ESSAYTITLE :DIABETES AND TYPES
ORGANIZATION OF ESSAY
This essay have introductory paragraph which have 4 sentences , body paragraph 1 which have13 sentences , body paragraph 2 which have 9 sentences , body paragraph 3 have 26 sentences ,body paragraph 4 have 9 sentences , body paragraph 4 have 9 sentences , body paragraph 5 have9 sentences , body paragraph 6 have 12 sentences , body paragraph 4 have 9 sentences , and forthe concluding paragraph , it have 8 sentences.This is a complete essay which has all the organization of the essay starting from introduction toconclusion. The essay is the classification essay, the author categorize or organize various thingsor views in different groups or categories.The author classified diabetes in type 1 , type 2 and type 3 diabetes. In each classified, there arecategory in each classified . The author using common classification transition , which is type 1 ,type 2 and type 3 . The author give examples of things that fit into each category.
PARAGRAPH
Most of the paragraph in the essay, the author write the topic sentence . I can see the authorstates the topic sentence that generally introduces the information that follow in the supportingsentences in the paragraph. The author mention the type of the diabetes in the differentparagraph. The author also explain each type of diabetes. Lastly, the concluding paragraph , theauthor summarize all the types of diabetes and mention again the essay outline in concludingparagraph.
Introductory Paragraph (4 Sentences)Present Situation : problems
 Diabetes is little or no ability to move glucose out of the blood into the red blood cells
Present Situation : definition
 Nearly 16 million people have diabetes in the United States, which narrows it down to about 1 out of everyseventeen people.
Present Situation : illustrate
 About 2,150 new cases are diagnosed each day.
The essay will (Essay outline)1
 Many of us do not clearly know what diabetes is and the different categories that it is classified in. 
Body Paragraph 1
(13 Sentences)
 
First type (Topic sentence)
 Risk factors for type 1 diabetes are a family history of the disease, the white race and being at an age less
 
CLASSIFYING ESSAY REVIEW
than 20.
Example 1
 Half the people diagnosed with type 1 diabetes areunder the age of 20.
Example 2
One of the causes of type 1 diabetes are genetics.Scientist suspect that heredity plays a major role intype 1 diabetes and researchers have found severalgenes that appear to increase the risk of type 1 .
Example 3
 Another cause is viruses.Type 1 diabetes often strikes shortly after a viralinfection.The viruses that cause this are mumps, Germanmeasles, and a close relative of the virus that causes polio
Example 4
 Another cause is chemicals and drugs.Studies show that ingestion of pyrinimil, a poison used to kill rats, can trigger type 1 diabetes.So can the prescription drug pentamidine, used to treat  pneumonia.
Example 5
The last cause is cows milk.Cows milk contains a protein similar to a protein found on beta cells. Exposure to cows milk during infancy may increase therisk of type 1 diabetes (Diabetes Research Institute).
Body Paragraph 2
(9 Sentences)
 There are many different procedures that can be taken for the diagnosis of diabetes. A series of light flashes, each at a different wavelengthis used to excite various proteins in the eye, eachaccording to a particular length and the proteins emit  fluorescent light.The pattern of light emissions reflects the distributionof carious proteins, which changes according tovarious psychological conditions (Scientific American Medical 22).This new method is based on synchronous fluorescent spectrometry, which combines a detector with a light source to measure the intensity of light emitted by proteins in the eye from each wavelength shown intothe eye.
 
CLASSIFYING ESSAY REVIEW
 A computer then compares the patient’s peaks and 
valleys of such measurements with correspondingspectra form normal and diabetic eyes. Any one of the following three tests shows the diagnosisvalues for diabetes: a measurement of fasting plasmaglucose, a blood test done after not eating for 8 hours,showing more than 125 mg/dl, and a oral glucosetolerance test after the person drinks a sugar solutioncontaining 75 grams in glucose in which the blood sugar levels is more than 199 mg/dl at 2 hours(Matinas 28).Two abnormal test results, using any of the three testsdone on two different days, are needed to make thediagnosis for diabetes. A screening test consisting of 50 g oral glucose followed by a plasma glucose determination 1 hour later. A special test is needed for the diagnosis of gestationaldiabetes (Stenger 2 A value of greater than 140 mg, 1hour after the 50 g load indicates the need for larger tests.
Body Paragraph 3 
(26 Sentences)
 
Second type (Topic sentence)
The second type of diabetes that will be talked about will be type 2 diabetes, or non-insulin dependent diabetes90 to 95 percent of people with diabetes have type 2diabetes (Romeo).
Example 1
Type 2 diabetes produce insulin but the cells in their 
bodies are insulin resistant, which means they don’t 
respond properly to the hormone, so glucoseaccumulates in their blood. Insulin resistance increases as weight increases and  physical activity decreases. All I know is that their most recent album features aguy on the cover receiving a lobotomy by machines.
Example 2
 Many people with type 2 diabetes have sedentarylifestyles and are obeseSome people with type 2 diabetes must inject insulin,but most can control the disease through a combination
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