philip_carter8915

I really admit that story took me since the very moment I started reading it. I recomend it to all of the ones that enjoy this kind of literature

rebecca_guthrie9307

A brilliant story, equally well narrated. Splendid

christopher_ward501

This story is very interesting. I would never had came up with any idea like this one. This very creative. Good job. You should continue to write stroies like this one or maybe even differdnt. Good luck on your next one.

cheryl_logan-summers1257

I thought it was a great story very well writtin and ironic. But you told the reader to much. There was nothing realy to infer or ponder.

m_bhatia8072

Well Done. A very intresting story with enough detail for the use of an imagination.

paul_graham6698

This story was great and interesting i could barely let my eyes look away ......Great Job Dude your awesome

mark_renwick2658

the story was very interesting...i like it!

lynne_watts2752

i liked this story. i believed it was meant to capture the readers interest and it really did.at some point you find yourself stopping to think about what has happened in the story, but then you figure it out, and honestly it isn't that difficult of a story to comprehend. in the end i really did enjoy this story but i think the right thing would have been so say what had happened to bith of the people. but it is all in good judgment.

tim_collins8581

It was a great story.The way it ended was drastic but it was very interesting

michael_foody8824

fabulous...fantastic story..totally different plot..even the use of language was very good..

janet_mcallister9181

It is rather one of a kind. The length is just right...i was kept interested the whole time!

carol_bonner3077

Nice story! I would have used it on my lesson. The details are clear and neat. I better read another st0ry from the author.

TammyBubbles

Wow! Quite a a story! GOOD JOB

camilla_hopper4641

This piece is gorgeous. The fragmented sort of format gives it a dreamlike quality that is so well suited by the voice and the descriptions were completely breathtaking, i loved it.