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this story is amazin it really does relate to teenage life cuz i been tru alot meh self! as any 1 got chapter 18 upwards or no wer i cn find it?
how many chapters are there
i need chapter 17
CHAPTER 22 PLLZZZZ NEEDDD NOT WONT NEED ITZ PLZ PLL HELP MEE !!!!!XX
i need chapter 22 to 25 plzzzz
I've got a story on my page very similar to this one, i only have chapter 1, 2 and 3 so far. its called 'I GREW UP WITH SKET'z'
Omg part 3 is like :O. its a gr8 stry n i luv the word "bludclurt"lol. Karl is a bad man n i feel reali sorry 4 Ricardo.u have 2 read it.
has eny1 gt part 4 n 5 plzzzzzzz can they let me no.
best story ive eva red... propa into it... but need the endin!! x
erez chapter 17i sat there with the tinyest hope.. but i was scared if it was ricardo and karl i didnt want anyting to happen to dem. malachi is a wild nutcase.. i sat there weeping."why you still cryin baby,dnt worry i will give you a nyc bath in our house" he sed wid da most biggest n happiess smile on his face.this guy had seriously lost the plot. "shut-up" i whispered. malachi turned his hed in confusion, he lukt at me 4 a few seconds. i found it hard 2 lose eye contact, i was scared. REALII SCARED.the car parked up in the centre of sum estate at least 45minutes away from my original house..malachi smiled at me then a vibrate began to develope on da car seat. malachi answered the fone..'wag1 you got her stuff' malachi sed'na her man slammed the door on me' i did not have a clue hu was on the ova side of the fone, all i cud here was a deep toned voice muttering quite slowly.'you aint getting your money, you didnt do the job.i felt a cold hand touch my face, i moved in panic. it was malachi.'i will call you back' i sed in a gentle bt ergent voicehe smiled at me and sed dat i was all he wanted. i sat there hoping and praying that ricardo and karl wud help bt there was still no sign ov them.'luk at me' malachi sed as his deep voice began 2 raise ova the radio music. i turned my hed wid da least pace. i faced him luk i did not make any sign of eye contact.'do you love me baby?'i jus sat there and didnt say anyting, this man had lost the plot.'juss pll-plzz bring me home'i sed stutturing and tryin 2 gasp 4 breath.meanwhile..ricardo sat in the car in rage'DATS IT' WAT ****** DOOR DUZ DIS PRICK LIVE AT' he screwed'*** MAN LETS GO' karl sed in a pissed voice'NAA HES HERE SUMWER I HAV A FEELIN N SHE IS WID HIM'karl sat there blank jus lukin round in the estate. he spotted a car jus sitting the with the lights on.'**** it' ricardo jumped out ov the car and heded straight 4 da estate. '*** HERE MAN'karl called.there was no sign ov responce or even a thought that went through ricardos mind. not 2 long afta karl followed. ricardo heded 4 da estate steps. wen he got there, a group of boiz bopped out ov a yard.'oi pussy hole, wat enz yu from cuz?'ricardo tuk no notice nothin was sinkin into his hed ova then knowin his onli love wnted to leave him. so he kws! ricardo panted through the crowd boiz. 1 ov them hu lukt lyk the leader of the pack stud in the way ov karl. karl was already not in the mood. this man stud the with half his clothes on. he was wearing jeanz n herarchis. he was a tall hench mixrace boi.karl stud in front ov him and screwed.'wat farrkin enz you frm blood?' the deep voice sed meanly'move' karl sed'cuz?' sed deep voice'MOVE MAN' he screamed'or wat g.. wat yu gonna do..'karl was mad at dis point. he kissed his teeth and 'BANG' ...
i fink dis story is ova siiik...im addicted to it...ive got up 2 part 4...nd i need part 5..pleez if ne1 hs it let me knw!!! bless xx
the story was gd but the ending was dumb if that was the ending???
siiiiiiiiik story but how can it finish lyk dat i need part 222222222 if der is wun so if der is can sumone leave a comment tellin me where i can find it!!!!!!!kl.
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